Immortal Love
Hello people I've just started this book and I hope you all love to read it and fan/comment. when you comment plz be honest cause i want to know what i need to do to make it better. this chapter is a little long but is worth reading. see you at the end. enjoy.
Intro
This story is like the title says about two immortals and their love. Alex (short for Alexandria) Riddle was your ordinary girl in high school junior or so it seemed she was actually an immortal who had all sorts of unimaginable powers like shape shifting so she could stay in one place for a long time and appear to be aging even though she can’t and she’s over a 1000 years old she lost count along time ago but still remembers her past as if it were yesterday since she can look over her memories over and over like a DVD. After being in Colorado for awhile her world gets a little more exciting when a new boy shows up and tries to impress her, but is also there to help her. She plays along and she sees some surprises but so does he lets see where this story goes and what awaits our characters.
Chapter one: Me and my life and him, November 20
My name is Alex Riddle and I’m a junior. I live alone in a nice cottage house that I adore, I’ll be keeping that house forever no way am I going to sell it like all the other ones. Oh yeah, I’m an immortal but no other immortal knows who I am (except a few), but I know every immortal there is and all about them. It seems like I’m a stalker, which I kind of am but that doesn’t matter, I do this so I can protect myself. I’m 17 years old, have pure white hair no joke and really light purple eyes that I adore.
“HI!” My friend Sophie yells from the other side of the hall.
She comes running towards me. Oh no, I thought this to myself. I knew it was going to be a long day at school. I tried walking away but started to have a dream about something but my friend Sophie jumps on top of me kicking me out of my daydream since I was just standing there like a complete moron in space.
Alex- “Oh, hi Sophie I didn’t know you were here so early on the first day of school.”
Sophie- “Alexandria Tuyet (pronounce like thwit) Riddle! How rude of you to ignore your only friend since fifth grade. I’m so hurt that you didn’t here my Hi.”
She put a hand to her heart with a hurt expression. I hated it when she did that and remind me how she was my only friend and saying my full name out in public. That’s why everyone would call me a twit since my middle name sounded like it and everyone would say I was related to Tom Riddle aka Voldemort. I knew they were joking and didn’t mind it all but it got annoying after awhile.
Alex- “I really wish you wouldn’t say my full name out in public like that and stop acting like you’re hurt because I know you aren’t. Anyway I heard a new boy was transferring to our class. Do you know who he is?”
Sophie- “No, I tried last night trying to break into the school files but there wasn’t anything in the files yet and there were teachers crawling everywhere. You know that they're onto me and my tricks but I still have a lot more for them.”
Alex- “That’s disappointing you didn’t find anything a least you didn’t get caught this time. We’ll have to try to night when their suspicion has died down.”
Sophie- “I love how you’re so willing to help me break into the school, Alex.”
I know what you are all thinking ‘Wow she’s going to break into a school to find out about one boy. She really is a stalker.’ It is not my fault but I can’t say no to my only friend when it comes to breaking into something especially because it’s what I live for in my boring eternal life. Also I can see myself in Sophie so I want her to become the best and live the life as a spy since that’s her goal in life. I just find it as my responsibility as her friend to help her reach that goal especially since I’ve been one all of my life so far.
