young love

chapter 1

bulma sat on the couch excitedly  with her best friend chichi. they where  watching the new report about adding new recruits to the elite team. bulma couldn't contain her excitement anymore  she started bouncing   up and down causing the seat to sink in.  it wasn't that she was fat its just the fact that she was applying to much force. calm down b chichi said with a little excitement  in her voice as well. i cant help it chi its been over a month and a half since we first sent our applications to the royal castle. now that there finally here we get to find out  who's the new members of the team. doesn't that make you exited or even nervous that one of us could be that lucky person. i guess your right b i never thought of it that way.  turning our attention back to the tv we saw the king with the list of the two people in his hands or so we thought. may i have your attention   please *coughs* first of all i would like to thank all the saiyans that could attend this gathering tonight Even though you could not be the lucky person to a bored my son prince vegetas elite  team. to get this over with i'm just going to announce the two names wright now. but please do no that it was a hard choice to make even though all of you would of been able to join this team with out further a due the two names i'm announcing are........ before he could finish his statement  my tv just had to shut of luckily he repeated it. may i say this one last time the people to join my sons team are chichi mau and bulma briffs. aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah me and chichi screamed in Union running in circles and exchanging air kisses we  made it chi we mad it i  no i heard aaaah. and the two fallowing people will meat in the castle at 3:00 sharp no sonner  no latter you are all dismissed have a nice night. hey  chichi you wanna go to your house grab some stuff to have asleep over and celebrate our victory of getting accepted into he elite team sure b lets take my car ok.

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