A very dumb mistake

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Ik some of you caught that Ja'Niya had her phone the whole time while she was kidnapped I just wanna say that in my opinion this was a very dumb book.  I came up with it in the 6th for a "scary" story project and I just thought I would post it, but now that I look back on it I see that I wasn't a good story at all and I'm in the process of writing another book that will be wayyyyyyy better then this. I also wanna go back to where the character Ja'Niya had her phone the whole while she was kidnapped and Ik you guys where like if your not tied up and you have your phone why wouldn't you call somebody for help. I just wanna say I'm a very slow child (not really) and I didn't realize that until I reread the book. Basically I just wanna say sorry for the dumb mistake.

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