the hunches.

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You are preparing to go out with your friends and suddenly your mother says to you: (son, please do not go out today, today I have a bad feeling and those things usually happen.

-Mami, you still cres in these things! Do not worry, I will not leave.

It is better to take from the advice of adults. Because after all they know more about life and the street than you do. For that we must listen to the hunches.

I will tell you a small and long story, about two guys who live a happy life.

Va 2 valas on the forehead)

It's 6:30 a.m. in the morning. As usual Carlos always knocks on the door as if he were at home.

-Carlos: boom boom boom.

-José: who is this at this time of the morning and who is breaking the door in that way?

-Carlos: It's me, Carlos, José, Remember that we have to go out today where the (panas).

-José: yes, I know. Wait, I'm changing.

Jose goes and I'll have the door to Carlos. And the mother from the other room says to jose:

-Mother of José: who is millet, has this time of the morning.

-José: it's Carlos, we'll go out and fly around the neighborhood.

-Mother of José: I told you that I do not want you to go with that boy. You know he has no fathers or mothers, who call his attention ok.

-José: mama! It's just a moment back at lunch time, I promise.

-jose: come on Carlos. "

"Brum" the door closes and Jose and Carlos leave.

-The neighbor: comadre, how are you? How it dawned

-Mother of José: there is a neighbor, if she knew how I feel.

-The neighbor: who has comadre? I see her very worried.

-Mother of José: there is neighbor "one of these days they will knock on my door, telling me that they killed my jose.

-The neighbor: there is a comadre 'you know how are these young people of today, who do not want to sit still in one place, only, up and down. Leave him "that he is young, and he has to live life.

-Joseph's mother: there is a neighbor, if you knew the bad feeling I have, every time my son goes out with the other one. That carlos, is a bad influence, for my jose.

-the neighbor: good comadre, I have to go, I'm glad to see today, we talk later.

-Javier's mother: ok neighbor, you go well. Chaoo "

(Bingo)

Carlos tells José, that tonight they will give a big blow and Jose says:

-Jose: Hey Carlos, cres it's okay to steal from the drug boss!

-Carlos: hey, hey. What's wrong with you, maybe you're afraid After that blow, we will live the happy life, we will be rich. No more hungry, no more cheap clothes. Because now the new bosses. It's us, you heard jose.

- José: "Well, what are we talking about?"

-Carlos: you imagine with $ 10,000,000 pesos. Five each. And you can take your mother from where I saw in that pigsty.

-José: then do not say more. And what time will it be?

-Carlos: at 10:00 pm at night.

- José: yaaah. Then we'll see you at night.

- Carlos: ok. Well, it arrives.

Carlos and Jose say goodbye and Jose goes home. But on the way Jose has a bad feeling. And he is thinking about the theft. And thinking, he says.

- José: eh more, I'll be rich and now. Let the others go to hell. Because I will not stay in the pobleza all my life.

When arriving at his house, his mother asks him where he was and he replies that he was with Carlos, where some friends.

(The exit)

It's 10:00 pm and Carlos knocks on the door and Jose goes out to meet him. And speaking in a vague voice he says:

- José: you have everything prepared Carlos.

-Carlos: Yes, everything is ready, we're leaving.

- José: Ok let's go.

Joseph. He left that night without knowing what would be the last time, that his mother would have it again.

They tell that in the news two young boys had died, with (2 valas in the forehead) and those boys were, Carlos and Jose. That they were killed that night of the robbery.

Since they were surprised by the leader of the gang and this took their lives without thinking about their families.

(End)

How many times, we must listen to our hunches. And realize what happens around us.

Joseph would never have died that night, if he would lend just a second, and listen to his mother talk about foreboding.

And you when you listen, your bad feelings. Let's not be victims of our own mistakes. Because we are already victims of life.

Listen to your parents and spend special moments with them. And love them as if it were the last. Tell him you love them.

(Reader)

I hope you liked this story. Because while I wrote it, it came to me in the deepest part of my heart.

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