What the point of you doing this
You are not going to get anywhere doing this
True
All of it true
Repeating In my mind like a song in tune
So tell me why does it feel like all of it true
I don't see it on the news
I don't see it on the newspaper while I'm walking to school
Your writing sucks
It doesn't have plot
All you ever do is write about what you feel inside
But what do you acutally feel in the outside?
These people are right
They are not telling lies
Maybe it time
