The Murders

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One Summer Day, Jack and Jill were playing in the muddy puddles. They live in a spooky forest. Jill was galloping in a GIGANTIC puddlle. The puddle was almost as large as a blow up pool. Jack was worrying about all the dirt on him and he was more of a scaredy-cat. Jill was a dare devil and didn't really care about anything. Then, Jack went inside to get all cleaned up. There was Jill, stil playing in the mud.

All of a sudden, Jil hears a whimper, almost like a puppy whimper, and then, she goes to check it out. She zooms through the trees like a rocket. The sound gets even closer, closer, and closer. Jill is not even scared. She hears Jack call out for her and she keeps going. Still frightened, Jack runs inside to get his Mom and Dad. Jill freezes because she does not hear the whimpering anymore. Coming up behind her, is a creature called "ITT". All of a sudden, ITT pulls Jill to the ground, and drags her by the hair to a shed that has over 5 locks. ITT throws Jill in the shed and ties her to a pole. Her head was bleeding because she was pulled so hard. Blood trinkled down her polka dotted shirt and down through her pants. "You will never see your family alive again" ITT chorkled.

Jack hopped in their toyota, with his parents. They sped through the big trees. Stephanie (the mom) shouted "Jil, Jill, can u hear me"?!? There was no answer. Danny (the dad) pressed on the gas pedal. The sound of the car filled the forest and Jill could hear it, so could ITT. "You will never see your family again" chuckled ITT. Jill started screaming. Stephanie could hear the screams. ITT clicked on the lights to the shed. Jill kept screaming. ITT strapped duct tape across her face. ITT left after a while when Jill became quiet. She started licking the tape to see if she could get the tape off. The tape slips off and she started screaming "Mom, Dad, Jack, can you hear me"?! There was no reply. She couldn't even hear the engines of the car. Jill started bawling.

"Help, help me. Please." Pleaded Jill. There was no answer. ITT opened the shed door and threw Danny, Stephanie, and Jack in the shed. He never tied the others up. They would not move. "Mommy, Daddy, Jack" cried Jill. "Are you ok"? No reply. Jill watched carefully to see if they were dead. Their chests were not moving. "I told you, you would never see them again." ITT said, proud of himself. "Say good bye, Jill" ITT said. ITT grabbed his shot gun and tried to shoot Jill but there were no bullets left in the chamber. He growled and threw the gun. He stormed out of the shed and slammed the doors behind him. Jill was sweating and her hands became sweaty. She slipped her hands out. She ran to her Mom. Her mom was breathing. Stephanie held her breath to make ITT think that she was dead. "Mommy" Jill cried. Stephanie popped her eyes open and kissed Jill all over. "Mom, are you ok? Jill asked. "No" Stephanie replied. They checked the others, and they were dead. The ladies started weeping. ITT threw the doors open. "Alive, are we"? ITT said as a smart ass comment. Jill distracted ITT while her mom ran out to get a weapon.

Wham! ITT fell to the ground. Stephanie stabbed ITT over, and over and over. They ran out to call for help. A few minutes later, policeman and fireman were there. Taking two bodies and putting them in body bags. While two other people were put into ambulances. The cops never found ITT's body.

A few weeks later, both Stephanie and Jill were released from the hospital. They moved to New York to live by themselves and be happy.

THE END.

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⏰ Last updated: Aug 23, 2016 ⏰

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