Denma: My Ninja Tale( discontinued)

my ninja tale 1

Hope you guys enjoy it.

Denma pov
Today was a special day in my life. I am finally becoming a ninja after being forced to learn for 4 years.

1 hour later
I came down the stiars to be greeted with a big hug from my mother.
" I am so gald you are becoming a ninja today" tighting the hug causing me to lack air.
I tapped her back and she immediately released me i quickly took in some air.
"Baby i am sorry" she said "it ok mom" still gasping for air.
She made toast with her sercet sause.
After eating i ran out the door. I looked up at the hokages stone face
' My face will be made there one day' I thought.
When i got to the academy i saw a hyuuga girl sleeping at the gate.
' what would a girl be doing by 6:30 am' i thought has i took her up to the class.
Immediately i got there i gently kept her on a seat and sat beside her.
She woke 2 minutes later and looked around in shock and disbelieve.
" How did i get up here?" sge questioned me.
"I saw you at the gate what were you doing there" i asked
"whats your business with what i was doing there?"
I twitched at her reply.she immediately brusted out in laughter.
"look at your face" while pointing at me. "funny" was my reply with a fake grin.
I thought how have not noticed a girl like her,she us loud and always smiling.
We started arguing about how lord 4th is better than lord 1st.
She was explaining how lord 4th defeated the kyuubi until we saw something that was just plain weird.
Naruto kissing sasuke while the class was in chaos iruka sensei came in.
"Good morning Iruka sensei"we all stood up to greet him in unisim."Good morning class".
Iruka sensei started with his usually speech about respinsibility This speech was longed but after 1 and half hour he was finally done.
"so each team will consist of 3 of you and a jounin superviors but due to our odd number one team will only have two members".
I was gald that at the fact of my being in a team with only one teammate.
Iruka sensei then took his clipboard and started
"Team 7-Naruto uzumaki sakura haruno and ....... sasuke uchiha"
" sensei why i am in the same team with him?" naruto said pointing at sasuke.
"He is the 2nd best while you are the last" everyone laughed at iruka's reply.
"sensei who is the best if my sasuke kun is not?" asked a very curious sakura.
"Denma Tenzou" Iruka answered while pointing at me.
He then continued "team 8 kiba shino and hinata. Team 10 shikamaru chouji and ino and lastly team 11 denma and mia.
I was gald but who is mia? i questioned myself till the girl beside me said "so we are team mate"." i guess so" so mia is the girl i met at the gate this morning.
" All of you go for break and come back here to meet your sensei." iruka sensei ordered before proofing away.
I waited for everyone to go out.
when i stood up sakura appeared in front of me. "I bet my sasuke kun can beat you in fight" she said with a grin on her face so how could i give up such an opportunity so i agreed to her challenge.
5 minutes later i was outside facing sasuke eye to eye .
"rules are simple first to land on the floor losses" a random guy said.
Begin! sasuke leaped at me with a hard punch but i dodged it on time. we started a taijustu battle which i was on the defense end.
'so this how an uchiha fights ' i thought before doing 5 backfilps.
katon: fire ball justu.
I saw a larged fire ball heading towards me. I threw a kunai beside mia and another at sasuke.
The fire ball landed on the ground i stood. Everyone looked at the fire not able to see me.
" where his he?" shikamaru asked.
sasuke dodged the kunai immiediately i appeared behind him and delivered a powerful lion combo.
Everyone looked in amazed as sasuke landed hard on the floor.
"How did he beat sasuke kun? " sakura asked ino.
flying raijin jutsu.I appeared beside mia and picked up my kunai. she held my hand and whispered " how do you know the 4th jutsu?". "my sensei taught me" i answered her and walked away.
The bell rang and a man with blonde hair walked in. " i am looking for team 11? " he asked before sighting our hands and took us away.
we arrived at training ground 11.
we both sat while the man with black hair stood and watched us.
"The best way to make a great team is by knoeing each other so let me go first" he said before clearing his throat.
" my name is Darama sarutobi.my likes are dogs and good hearted people my dislike i dont know,my hobby i dont have and dream become the best sensei and mentor". He then pointed at mia and told her to i.troduce herself.
"my name is mia hyuuga,my likes my nii san and rices balls,my dislike war,hobbies reading about konoha's histroy and dream become the strongest kunochi" Darama sensei then pointed at me.
"my name is Denma Tenzou.my likes and dislike are none of your business hobby training and lastly my dream is to become hokage"
"ok so tomorrow we start with our first mission" senei said before proofing away.
I stood up and walked home quietly .
"Where are you going lets walk home together" mia shouted from behind.
we continued our arguement until we reached the hyuuga compound.
we waved bye and walked in opposite but i felt a connectiom with mia but what is it.

3rd person pov
A shadow looks at denma "finally he is ready" he said before disappering.

so what do you guys think pls vote and comment.