The Magical Cat

Chapter 1

So this is my first story I really appreciate feedback tell be what you think. I won't be offended. But if you don't like my story please just tell me what I can do to improve my writing.
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I sprinted as fast as I could away from that death trap people call school. Again again they picked on me for being small and weak. I looked over my shoulder to see that my pursuers were still hot on my trail. I grabbed my best friends hand and ran into an alley way. We crouched in the shadows waiting for the bullies to go past.

Right when the bullies were passing us the dumpster had the urge to mew! Wait dumpsters don't mew!probably just a cat. Drawing attention to me that I didn't want me and steph curled farther into the shadows causing the bullies to lose sight of us.when the bullies walked away. We slowly crept over to the meowing dumpster and opened it slowly. Inside there was a little white kitten. I hated when people just dumped animals in the streets. It's not right people who dump animals should be arrested.

Bet your all thinking I'm fifteen or something like that. But no. I'm five.my full name is Race Maria Richardson. Live at sunny smiles orphanage in Sydney, Australia.

I looked over to steph as if asking should I pick the kitten up. she nodded as if to approve i scooped up the tiny kitten and held him gently against my chest. I noticed that the kitten was very skinny. I decided that he needed a name. it was either Antonio, Steve or Splotch
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