Elements | Adventure On Crete

Mysterious Girl

This will not be the orgnail book, this is just to see how menny people would like reading this in comic form

heres your sample

It was the beginning of the school year in belmont high. It was the year of 2016. Jade is a tenth grader. Jonas is in 11 so is Jeb. Jade had known there best friends since middle school, so did Jonas and Jeb. Jade is best friend is Jazmine Summers. Jonas and Jeb known eachother since 4th grade.

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Jade started to spent most of her free time with Jade and Jeb, mostly in the library and at lunch, even if they had the same classes they would sit with each other. Jasmine was usually doing work in quiet places with less people but they did hangout at lunch. They had no classes together so Jade made friends with Jonas before Jeb.
Jonas and Jeb aswhile known eachother in middle school but much eaier in their life time.

Meanwhile Shelvey lives in Crete, Nation of Cydonia, a dystopian country.

The big nation of Cydonia is in a different planet called Crete. The scenery has lots of trees around the village, towers that generate electricity, water around the castle walls of the outer bailey on the left, lakes and rivers far from the castles as well. In between the walls of the outer bailey has wood for flooring. Cydonia also has nice tall castles made of grey cobblestone. If you lean on the cobblestone that on the sides of the bridge you can get a nice view of the rest of the castle and mountains on toward the village also the other bridge across but doesn't have a wall of bailey,just a wall. On the sides of the bridge there's blue glowstone horizontally across. On the castle towers however the blue glowstone goes on the vertical way. The left tower of the castle is smaller than the one on the right. The tower on the right known as upper bailey has a block of more glowstone and a bigger and longer layer of cobble stone but a little shorter the block of glowstone. The upper bailey is connected to the castle keep going west. On the left of the building has a wall covered by grass and on the right has water and a window that u can see through to see the ocean view, next to it is three tall trees that are very close to the castle keeps left side. As you go passed the castle keeper the gateway is there and on your way out the other door, you cross the other way to the village. There's three tall castle towers, one of them you see as you walk out of the gate house. The other one you see on the east than on the west side....

Shelvey is now 15 years old so she decided to finally use the portal to go to earth

"Attacten my fellow subjects I announce that I'm going to Earth tomorrow morning to find the chosen ones, and friends to replace the others who died. I'm leaving with no one in charge so behave yourself

People started cheering and roaring as shelvey went to her room and was wondering if she's making a mistake

Shelvey sat on her bed, it was sunset. She thought to herself "will satia take over when I'm gone? Will my people die once again like my three guards I losted when i was 8?

Shelvey want to bed tossing and turning as if her dream was a flashback of all the kayos that happened in Cydonia years back, The whole village on fire, the castles and towers where the only things left over. Had no idea where my parents when some believe they made others believe they died, no one knows even her sister Sally was never seen again.

Next day Shelvey just looked at the window visning how Sitia hit us that day, people getting killed every minute, ether if it was Cydonia or Stia's people. She remembered the people breaking into her parents bedroom with very high tech blue and white guns. Started rapidly killing people and pushing them into the walls.

She remembers one of the men saying "Surrender now untech civilians, we oder you..." Shelvey was too worried to listen to the rest of the sentence.

"We lost lots of people but why did it have to be my guards, there were like friends too, like family."

Shelvey decided it was time to leave Cydonia, not knowing when she will be back, or will she ever. She was walking across the bridge as a crowd of people down below are watching her. She looked back and whispered

"Bey my people."as she cried quietly into the other door as she made it across the bridge.

She was hoping this works because she was making this portal for years. She was lonely needed friends and more people to use The Elements necklaces to generate protection to sita, like the guards in the past.

Shelvey looked at the portal, as it moves clockwise, she looked back at the door for a second than left. She was moving really fast, than she landed on a field. There was a weird metal hanging from a piece of net with a round object with checker designs on it only its not diamond shape it was different, black and white.

"Oh...... this must be a the strange castle they call school!" Shelvey just noticed she looks different for an unexplained reason, shorter hair and completely different elfit. "

She went inside and looked around, she went left through the halls and tolk the closest stair case up, it was light brown more tan.
Shelvey wanted to open the closest door that seemed to have lots of books in it. She thought maybe there was spell books there.
She went through he other door, just then she noticed 2 boys at the table who reminded her of her old friends
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Jonas was sitting in the library with his two best friends Jade and Jebediah. A new girl sees us in the library.

Shevley hung out with them for awhile. Shelvey Started to talk to them about her old friends. Jonas believes there's something fishy about Shelvey, with her acting all merry after moving this late in her school year. She decided to give them necklaces, Jonas's necklace was designed to look like it was made out of ice, Jade the sun and Jebs was a crescent moon, strangly a green leaf neckless was left over. Jonas thought to himself "why shelvey is nice to us so, she just met us." And as Jonas looked down at the necklace and thought to him self "I swear It looked like frigon ice!"Jeb acted very strange towards, by putting slowly in put the necklace in his bag he would never wore it. Jade on the other hand loved it, she couldn't live a day without it. It gave her strength somehow.

Few months later this mysterious girl dispersed, she hasn't been seen for awhile . Jade was walking with Jeb to the library on power hour and felt a strong wind in the middle of the hallways, so strong they could just get pulled away. Shelvey wanted Jade and Jeb to come with her, without asking she pulled them inside....

*going to be in comic form soon*