Chapter 1

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[Edited for the second time, yay]

Edit: I'm editing this again. And you know why? Because I can't stand the cringe's! I'M DYING. I'll try not to change it a lot but I'm not sure if I'll succeed.

Narrator's point of view.

The noise behind Konoha's biggest graveyard was not to miss under any circumstances, well, except for the deaf. Nearly the whole of Konoha stood there along side the Hokage.
"What's the demon doing on lord Fourth's grave?" An unimportant villager whispered to the villager beside him. Some other's whispered about how disrespectful that was and many agreed on it. Many, excluding Iruka, Konohamaru, Teuchi and Ayame. They agreed to spy on him to see what he was doing.

As Naruto performed the seal something went wrong. The seal was originally made so that no one could listen to what the user was saying but the error made it so that the user -in that case Naruto- could hear nothing from the outside and everyone from the outside could hear everything said on the inside. "Here goes nothing." His whisper was low, almost as if he was trying to use it as a comfort.

~oOo~

"Mom, Dad... I... am sorry that I visited so late, y'know." Almost immediately, as if magic, whispers -accusation's and death wishes- spread among the villager's. "But it's not really my fault... I never knew that you were my parents. I heard it a day ago, from Kurama, the 'Nine Tailed Demon Fox' as the villagers call him. But he isn't all that bad. I mean, it wasn't his intention to destroy the village. A man Madara Uchiha was controlling him... Though you already probably know that... Oh man... He saved me so many times from...... those creature's you call villager's..."

~oOo~

Gasp's spread at the mention of the Kyuubi and the villager's. Perhaps... He may really be the son of the yondaime Hokage? Thoughts as such were unspoken however not unknown. But a disagreement of a villager snapped them out of the thought and they agreed not to believe Naruto but to continue spying on him. Only a certain group of four lowered their head's at the villager's behavior. I mean seriously, he really looks like Minato and he has Kushina's personality. Not to mention he loves Ramen just like his parent's.

~oOo~

"I'll tell you about them later....."

"Dad, it's alright, I'm not angry with you, y'know. About the whole sealing thing and stuff. I was lonely, and the villagers... did abuse me.... some even tried to..... force themselves... Uh, yeah... That's so low..."

"As I was saying I'm not angry with you, I don't hate you. I just.... miss you. I was all alone until one day when I turned four and I accidentally went into an alley and that ended in another.... beating. But that's a story for another time. That day I met Itachi, Mikoto-oba-san and Shisui-nii." Angry growl's and gasp's echoed at certain name's.

"Itachi and Shisui saved me that day. When they brought me to the Uchiha estate there were actual smile's and happy face's. Unlike the glare's and insult's I knew only too good. Mikoto-oba-san gasped and went to bandage my injuries. I was so confused. Why would anyone show me kindness? I learned to trust her. I know that Mikoto-oba-san and you, Mom, were friends and that you, she, Dad and Fugaku-oji-san wanted our family's to become one big family. I'm sorry... You probably already know.... They're dead. Though, you're in for a surprise!" Confused glances passed through the crowd.

"Hehe, ah anyway. I heard that mom had that Dattebane thing! It's a Uzumaki thing I guess, 'ttebayo!" that's when some people indeed accepted the fact that Naruto was Kushina's son.
"As for you dad... don't worry, I may got mom's personallity but I got all your look's. I'm just so fabulous!" People stopped whatever they were doing when they finally figured out that he's the fourth's son. And their bad behavior towards him. And the fact that he knew the Uchiha's.
"I met my godfather Jiraiya and my godmother Tsunade, unfortunately they... died, but that'll change soon too!"

What? or similar thought's went trough people's minds.
"I met the old man too. I mean the third Hokage! He was so nice to me! And I have a father figure, Iruka-sensei! No worries dad, no one could ever replace you!" Iruka wore a proud smile which had 'happiness' written all over it.
"Ah ah! I met Teuchi-jiji and Ayame-nee too! They make the best Ramen ever!"
Teuchi and Ayame chuckled and giggled at this.

"I have a student too, Konohamaru. He always calls me boss. He's the old man's grandson." Konohamaru grinned his usual from ear to ear grin.
"Ano sa, ano sa... Who did i meet too? Ah! There is also Oropedo--I mean Orochimaru! That bastard killed pervy sage, baa-chan and jiji." At first there was a heavy silence until sobs started along with tear's as a tired smile settled on his face.
Shock was an understatement for the villager's. Naruto Uzumaki really cried and smiled an actual smile. Well a sad one, but still a smile nonetheless.

~oOo~

"Then there is Mikoto-oba-san and Fugaku-oji-san's second son. Sasuke Uchiha. He became a rouge ninja after running to that pedophile. I mean yuck! Who would do that... For petty revenge..... The truth will surely crush him..."

"Anyway's, I brought him back to the village a week ago. But knowing him and the rest of the village, they will eventually decide to banish me, that is if they didn't already. The 'demon'. That's quite ironic coming out of their mouths. I wanted to help Sasuke but I know him too good. He probably lied about myself and him. As I said a week ago I brought him back with a bit injuries, while I had three chidori holes in my chest..... He was treated like a king,while I had no one beside the four -wait five people. Kurama healed my injuries. If he didn't... I would've died. Not that they would care. My whole life has been a rather big lie since I was four. I'm actually somewhat smart, y'know... I just hide it behind...... Something what you would call a 'mask'. Like my feeling's. I'll undo the genjutsu because I hide my.... trueself and well I need to re-new it anways."

And just like that, reality hit them in the face. Gasp's, face's of horror, shame, guilt, disgust, sadness and disbelief popped up as they realized that they betrayed their precious yondaime. But Naruto's friend's and sensei's had been feeling worse. Team 7 the worst.

~oOo~

Naruto now looked exactly like a copy of the yondaime. With whisker marks that is. But that didn't bother him. It was a sign that he was a Jinchuuricki, meaning he had his pride and Kurama as a friend. Of course, some girl's started their drooling.

He took a deep breath.
"As for your student's... I know what you thought about them. Well more like what happened to them... Well I'll skip that part. In the academy it was really bad, I'm sorry for my lagunage but it's true. I thought it would be better when the teams were made. But it got only worse y'know. I pretended to have a crush on Sakura Haruno... She's, to be blunt, a bitch. I'm sorry, but it's true. She hits me for no real reason! Then there's Sasuke with his ego. His ego is bigger than my appetite for Ramen, and that's something. But what hurts the most was that my sensei was your student dad. I only learned tree walking from him! I am stronger too! I'll show you later." Team 7 lowered their head's in shame. Kakashi was crying on the inside, for he failed his sensei's son.

"He favored Sasuke instead of Sakura and me. Hell, he even trained Sakura a bit more. Well that doesn't matter either anyway now. I'll show you another thing I can do. It's a second genjutsu." Everyone's jaw dropped as they heard that. And when he did undo the genjutsu he had fox ears and nine fox tails.

Their jaws eventually hit the floor.
Not to mention that some people were, more or less, attracted. Lust had that effect on people.

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To be continued

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