The Fall

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Note :please don't expect much. I'm not for writing stories. And I change the story. Add extras, POV's, extra conversations, and actions.
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"Humans...  And M-Monsters?! "
...
...
You we're at the mountain
And you fall...  Accidentally..?
You bring your stick with you.

. . .

You're awake now.
It was dark around you, and it's nice cause you fall in the bed of golden flowers. (If not, you're probably dead.) You spin around to look.
And you go straight the line and find a door?..
You choose to enter. Without making any noise. A flower starts to appear.
It looks like one of those golden flowers but a little difference
You we're shock to hear that the flower can speak
But you look like lack of showing your mood and emotions at your face, and you kinda look bored.

"Howdy!  I'm flowey, flowey the flower!"
You put your hands on the back of your head and makes you start to move a little closer.

A few minutes later..

It makes you feel to lose some trust on the flower. Hearing...
"Here let me give you some LOVE. "
You starts to wonder. 

In your mind
I just got in a place we're no humans would like to fall, and I just saw a flower... Talking?!! 
Ha...  What love?  Why?..  Is that so darn important?  The flower seems creepy..

You forgot that you make an awkward silence.
But seems like a flower Know that you don't speak, cause you're new to this world. Pretty shocking, well,  for you?  not much important to show your concern.

"You're not gonna move, aren't you?
Another one time. "

Still.
You didn't move.  
The flower look mad.
You starts to sweat. Not knowing what will happen next.

"I know it.
All YOU want is to SEE ME SUFFER,
Isn't that correct?! "

You shake your head. Many times as possible.

Making the flower get mad, more and more.

And then the bullets looks much many than before, and the bullets starts to make a circle shape.
Around YOU

You wanna scream...
But you can't it's impossible to reach another person's ears out there.
You starts to shake

The bullets around you, get closer...
And CLOSER

Toriel's POV:
I was at the tree, looking at it, and my memories starts to play.
i must check on my post'
I walk a little faster, and wishing to have a friend in my home, honestly I need a human friend.
Like the past...
C-
I guess I forgot her name already.
I walk more fast ti'll in no time I saw a flower in the front of a.. Human?
It's been.. Such years since the last human fall. And I got the news.. A bad news about the human's death.
It's such a blessing to saw a new human. That will make me feel more alive than I am, less lonely. "
Saying it on my mind

Normal POV:

That creepy flower was just laughing like a total maniac and without noticing another weird thing, a monster appears.
It's bigger than the flower, and can possibly stop the flower from killing
YOU

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⏰ Last updated: Jun 21, 2018 ⏰

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