How we fell. A dramoione fanfic

How I Fell-H1

    The boys drank their poly juice potion and cringed as they swallowed. I explained the plan to them one more time. "You two will head down to the common room, find Draco, and question him. I will drink my potion after you leave and then follow you as backup. Do either of you have any questions?"
    "Ya, who are you turning into?" Ron asked.
    "I'm turning into Pansy, I think she would be the greatest distraction for you two to escape." I replied. "No go you two, before the potion wears off!"
    With that, both of the boys left and I drank the potion. Now I get why the boys cringed. It's disgusting! I ran down the hall until I spotted them. 'Great! They've found Draco.' I thought. I snuck behind them and made sure to listen to the password.
    I waited a bit and then said, it confidently. "Pure Blood." The hidden door opened and I immediately saw Draco and his minions, (aka Harry and Ron). I have been keeping track of Pansy's patterns throughout the day and I know that right now she is up in her room getting ready for bed. Since I knew that I was safe, I sat down and started playing with Draco's hair while the boys continued to talk. Draco paid me no mind so I was able to watch the boys as they talked.
    Harry and Ron are terrible actors. Luckily, Draco is super gullible. I noticed that the boys were turning back and they didn't seem to notice so I signaled to Ron who started freaking out.
    In order to distract Draco I pulled his face to me and kissed him. While I did so I frantically waved at the boys and hoped that they would leave. Luckily they did, but I couldn't push him away- that would ruin the act. So I kept kissing him. Slowly I felt my hair lengthen and I frantically prayed that the would push me off but he didn't. Then he opened his eyes and saw that it was actually me. He looked shocked but he didn't stop. He actually kissed me more passionately then he had before.
    Then Blaise walked in and noticed us. Draco pushed me off of him and looked at me apologetically. So, I ran off.
I only liked it because it was my first kiss. I hope.

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Hello lovely readers, I think that I'm going to write one chapter as Hermione's POV and the next as the same events through Draco's POV. Please give me some feedback. My work does need some improvement. Ok, bye!