OC Review Book

Frozenfeather

This OC belongs to Cookiexsn

Fandom : Warriors
Personality : bold and energetic
Sexuality : bisexual
Looks : silver fur and unusually blue eyes
Extras : she's a medicine cat in RiverClan.

So I'm just gonna say that you made me so happy, I was losing hope that anyone would see this book. I'm crying happy tears.

So the first thing I notice is the name, I honestly think that the name makes sense because of the looks that you gave this character.

One thing that sticks out to me is the way you put the sexuality, because this is a medicine cat you didn't have to put it in. Not to mention that you put a question mark, so were you questioning whether or not she had a preferred gender or if cats can like the same gender ( they can like the same gender, in case you were wondering)
Or is Frozenfeather going to the medicine cat who has kits despite being a medicine cat, like
Ol' yeller ( comment if you get the book I'm referencing )

I love your character, I think the way you gave her all these traits are very RiverClan. I really appreciate you taking the time to put your OC in here.

The only thing that you should change is that you should give your character more traits to make her stick out more, unless she is just a side or supporting character in which case she is perfect.

I rate this character a 9.8/10

This character is truly amazing.

Oh and Cookiexsn I will be watching for your comment and I hope you keep making characters like this.

See you all later my amazing readers.