The Massive Escape!

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One beautiful majestic day in Somerset, United Kingdom, there was a family that lived in, 11, baserfield road, they lived in the massive 7 bedroom house. There was a Mum and Dad and there 6 children, Abby, Jessop, Jacob, Ellie, Molly and me, John. It was a normal day like usual, but me and Jessop thought it would be a good idea to go out to the park. The park was four roads, three turns and a hill. We thought it was quite normal. It was. Me and Jessop went there at least once a month. By the way, me and Jessop are Identical twins. People can tear us apart by seeing th colour of our skin, I'm tanned he's pale white. Me and Jessop got to the park with loads of time to spare without our friends, so what we thought was go and play on the tire ring. When our friends (Joey, Kim and Liam), turned up we all went on the fair that was a couple of streets down. The fair cost us all all together £15. We all got a little bit scared because we all might not have enough money,  but we did, thankfully. Me and Jessop decieded to go on the biggest ride there, Qwerty 8. Qwerty 8 was the biggest and meanest rides there. Qwerty 8 had 7 loops, 12 dips, 6 turns and last of all a straight 90 ft tall 100mph air dip! So Jessop said " I ain't going on that! " I decieded to go on it anyway's. "Stay here with all of our bags and make sure you don't lose them! I will bloody kill you do!" So I went on the ride with Joy. I couldn't wait!

So I went on the ride and I decided to look out for Jessop. I couldn't see him. I felt like I was alone. When I got off of the ride I started shouting Jessop's name, without thought, our bags were still there, i got more and more nervous. Someone turned around to me (who I didn't even know) and said " I just saw you over there with a man in a black tee - shirt! How the hell did you get here in that kind of time?"

" He's my identical twin! I think he's getting kidnapped!" Me and this girl called Liz, both looked out for him. Then suddenly I felt someone touching my waist. He put me in a van and drove off. I started shouting out Liz's name! I saw all of my friends, Jessop and even more! This man seemed like a cereal killer. It didn't seem right. We came to a sudden stop. We all rocked around the van. When we got out of the black van doors, I shook like a earthquake. When we all got out of the van, there was 6 men with knives and guns, it seemed like it was a death house! When we all got inside the house, we were all shut in the basement. Then I remembered that me and Jessop had both got IPhones for our 15th birthday and I rememembered that I have mine on me! I had 2 bars, and enough credit to last me 30 minutes. I called my fathers phone, it didn't ring, and suddenly one of the men threw themselves at me, smashed my phone and cut my arm! Then I remembered, I couldn't here the door lock. I quickly sprinted up the stairs, what a relief the door was wide open! Me, Jessop and this boy called James ran out of the door and escaped out of the front door and ran out! I didn't know were we was, it was a deserted farm, James knew exacally where he was. We ran and ran, until we hit a little farm shop. From there we got a lift to the nearest town. Me and Jessop headed one way and James ran another.

After we went in our different directions we heard James scream! We ran back and we saw he same black van! We ran, without thinking about James. We got to the nearest police station. We told the local police and they laughed straight in our faces like we were faking. So we ran back to somerset that was 12 miles away. Me and Jessop hitchhiked, and thankfully someone took us to somerset. We drove in a Volkswagen Touren and there I tried my home number and my mum picked up! She was frightened were we was. When this woman got to somerset she drove us home, we got our mum and got in our ford transit and there we continued to go to the local police station. My mum told them and they followed us to the farm house. When we got there we saw James cut up into pieces and nearly getting shot for escaping he horrible farm. The police caught the 6 men and drove them to the local police station. My mum got relieved to of found us.

2 weeks after the kidnapping the 6 men got sent to prison, gulity. From there all of our friends and new friends never went to that fair again! We were to afraid. Now the police have secured the park and making sure no-one kidnaps anyone again.

Thanks for reading :)

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 30, 2012 ⏰

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