Love Luis Coronel

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                                                           Chapter 1

                                                   "Love Luis Coronel

I was in my room painting my nails.

   When I get a notification on Facebook from a guy named Luis Coronel.

   He send me a message say "Estas muy bonita como te llamas?"

   I ignored him and  keeped doing my nails.

    I went to sleep when I got a notification from this guy named Luis Coronel.

    It said "Me dase tu numero?"

   I also ignored the message.  In morning I got ready for school. 

    I did my hair brushed my teeth  washed my face and changed. 

   I was eating breakfast when im on Facebook checking my notifications.

    I click on Luis Coronel. He was really cute.

  I send him a message to I said "Gracias y no te voy a dar me numero sorry es que no te conosco."

    Luis answered right away "Por eso dame tu numero y podemos ablar.

   I said "Esta Bien".

    I gave him my number. So he would just stop.

    I went to school. When I was in class I felt my phone vibrating. 

   I was scard that the teached was going going to hear and take it away. 

  So I asked the teacher if i could go to the bathroom. 

   She said yes. I went to the bathroom and it was luis texting me.

   Luis said "Te enbito un elado  hoy en la tarde si"?

  I texted him back I said si claro! 

   When I was done with school I went home I totally for got that I was supposed to meet Luis.

   I texted him "Donde quieras que los mirimos?" Luis text back

  "Aye un Parke can you go?" I said yea its fine.

   I was walking towards the park. I got there and I sat in a bench.

    Till someone came and said Hi.

   He said "Holla yo soy Luis Coronel.

  I said Hola yo soy Erica.  Luis said "que nombre tan hermoso.

    I said "Gracias". Luis sat down.

  We started to talk. I asked Luis  i don't mean to be rude but how did you find me on Facebook?

   Luis said we have a friend in common. 

   I said really how cool!  By where we were sitting at there was a ice cream man selling ice cream. 

     Luis said "Quieras?" I said "Si claro".

   Luis said what do you want I said I want a vanilla ice cream. 

   Luis said 2 vanilla ice cream please.

   The guy gave him the ice cream. 

  We sat down again. Luis was really funny.

    It was late so I said I need to go.

   Luis then said I'll take yoh home if you want? 

   I said no its just like 3 blocks away its ok.

   Luis said no ill take you cuz what happened if there were guys trying to do something to you. 

    Then I'll never forgive myself.  I smiled and said yea sure. 

I got inside his car. He stated to drive me home. ♥♡♥♡♥♡

Hi people hope you like it! please comment and vote if you want me to do another chapter.... im not kidding guys :p lol    THANKS!!!!!!!!!
Please don't copy thats just wrong and rude

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