Love Luis Coronel

Be Mine?

                                            Chapter 4

                                           "Be Mine?"

Instead i saw Christan with that chick again kissing.

   Like i said i still had feels for him.

    I was in shock. So decided to go back home i didn't wanna see him at all.

    I got in my car and started to cry.

   I started the car then started to drive home.

   I totally forgot that i was suppose to me Luis.

   I texted him "Sorry but couldn't make it".

   Luis texted quickly and said "Si queries voy a tu casa?"

  I said "Si claro por favor".

   I got home and put some shorts.

   I was making a sandwich when the door bell rings.

   I opened it and it was Luis.

   Luis said "why couldn't you make it?"

   When he was telling me this we were walking towards the kitchen.

   I said "To tell you the true i did go but i saw Christian kissing the girl that was in the pic with her".

   I started to cry when i was talking to him. I told him "I still have feelings for him tho".

  Luis looked straight in to my eyes and said "Christan doesn't deserve your tears".

   Then he started to wipe then off. I gave him a huge.

  I said to myself why I'm i telling him this?

   If i tell my friend Isabela she might be bissy.

    Luis said "what did you look in to him anyways"?

   I answered idk what i looked in him"?

    Luis quickly said you should of put your eyes on me then Him.

   I was Speechless. then Luis said "Erica since the first time i saw you in your picture i fell in love with you".

  I was just looking at him.

   It was kind of awkward but it was cute lol.

   Luis then said "I've been wanning to tell yoh to be my girl friend,

   but when i found out that yoy had a boyfriend i knew that i was only going to be your friend,

   but now that tou don't have one "Quieres ser me Novia?"

  I stood quiet for a bit. I took deep breaths and then said,

   "Perdoname pero as you could see i just got off a realtion ship i don't thats a good idea right nowsorry".

  Luis said "Yo te comprendo I'll just go".

   Luis got up and walked to the door then he looked back he saw me crying.

   But then he just closed the door and left.

   Luis-POV-    when i was in my car i was thinking did i just fuck this up?

  Was it the wrong time?

  Would we be still friends?

  I felt bad when i saw her cry i don't like seeing her cry.

  I wanted to turn around and go huge her but i understand she needs space.

But i hope i didn't lose her as  a friend.

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