Make Me Beautiful: A CreepyPasta Fanfiction

Finally Chapter 1!

Mars: ok guys so dis is da first chapter except its part three.

Jinny: that's because the last two parts were author's notes.. *annoyed look*

Mars: *glares intensely*

Jinny: what? I'm just saying we shouldn't have made that many authors notes!

Mars: IT WAS ONLY TWO!!!!!

Jinny: whatever..

Mars: enjoy da new chapter y'all.

Jinny: that grammar though.. On with da story!

Mars: .....

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He he~Jinny

What the hell the book started already jeez.. ~Mars

BT Dubz there's characters standing for us. ~jinny and Mars ;D

COPYRIGHT © MARCELA G. AND JINNY C.

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Venus's (mars technically) POV

I was gasping for air as I ran away from the creatures following me in the forest. I could hear the crunching of leaves and twigs as I ran for my life. They were getting closer as I got slower and slower from exhaustion. I finally stopped, inhaling and exhaling. They were catching up to where I stopped. Once they got close to me to be able to speak one of them said,

"We're only trying to keep you away from somebody."

"Who?" I asked, curious of who we were running away from.

"Za-

*end of dream*

"Venus?"

"VENUS! WAKE THE FUQ UP" I heard as I slowly opened my eyes. ' That felt so real', I said to myself as all of the visions of the dreams flooded in to my brain.

" Venus are you deaf? I'm asking you a question?!" Sam (Samantha) said to me as I snapped back to reality.

"What?" I asked Sam, turning to meet her gaze.

"Did you forget about the party today?"

"W-what party? Oh my god the party!" I almost shouted out, as I saw a dress hanging from the door.

"Yeah, it's from 7:30.. Or is it 8:00..8:00 to like 2 in the morning. All of the hot guys and cute girls are gonna be there. We could be.. Normal.." Sam said as she got lost in her thoughts. Her eyes always sparkled when she even heard the word normal. That's all she ever wanted to be. In the crowd, as one of them. In my opinion, I like her the ways she is. She was always funny and silly when she talked and we always talked about those weird shows almost nobody watched. In fact, I wasn't very fond of normal at all. I, on the contrary, wanted to be different, weird, to stand out. I didn't just want to be another person in the world that would do nothing in their lives in the future. I wanted to be more than that. Almost like a hero in a way. A role model, something people admired.

"VENUSSS THE FUQ WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU" Sam nearly screamed at me as I averted my gaze to her. I got lost in my thoughts again. 'dumb Venus' I said to myself.

~ 11 hour time lapse~

"Hurry up its 7:30 we're gonna be late for the partayy." Sam whined as she grabbed her purse. I still had to add some eyeliner, mascara, and lip stick.

"Don't worry we won't be late. " I assured her as I finished doing my makeup. I added a bit of blush to finish it off.

"Oh my gosh." Sam said as she looked at me.

"What? Oh no I look like a clown don't I?" I asked worriedly.

"No... You look amazing" she said.

I looked at myself in the mirror. I looked, incredible. The dark blue mini dress and the small heels with the tied up bun with a strand of hair falling at the side all fit together perfectly. I was pretty impressed with my creation.

" Let's go then!" I said as I grabbed my purse and went outside to the taxi waiting for us.

"Take us to...

~At the party~

As we got off the taxi, we made our way to the door. I expected to have to ring the doorbell but the door was wide open, letting strangers in easily. Oh well, the way people are these days. Letting creeps stalk around people's houses. Good times.

Sam and I entered the giant mansion-like house to see all of the 'populars' stop everything they were doing. I saw Sam cautiously look down to the floor. A girl I've seen in school spoke up.

"Bri, you let these, bitches, into our party? What the hell is wrong with you? They're like aliens. Why don't they just kill themselves already."

I could tell Sam was really hurt by those words. I was hurt, slightly but I didn't mind. I was pretty strong actually. Unlike Sam, who was always vulnerable and naive even when I consoled her. I could do nothing about it. A girl, most likely 'Bri', spoke.

"W-well, um.. t-they're not that bad..." Bri hesitated cautious of what she said to the bitchy girl.

"Ugh. Fine I'll let them stay but don't let them do anything alieny. I don't want them to contaminate my stuff. Ha!" she laughed at her utterly stupid words.

" I-it's my house and my stuff actually..." Bri muttered, biting her lip from going any further, trying to make no one hear her, although I heard what she said.

~after the party~

"We better go it's gonna be late," I said to Sam, almost enjoying the party. She looked a little drunk, and was laughing along with some boys.

"O-*hiccup*-Kay," she answered.

"Shit.." I mumbled under my breath. I ah forgotten to call the taxi. I guess I had to take a shortcut. Lucky for Sam, she lived across the block. Literally. And she went to my house so we could go on the taxi together. She has so me issues.

"Sam! I forgot a taxi so Ima walk home ok?" I called to Sam.

"Kay! See ya," she almost yelled out, although she didn't know she wouldn't see her any time soon.

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Mars: Muahahahahaha! >;D Hello my sexy pizzas! Did ya like my new chapter?-

Jinny: your first...

Mars: *growls*

Jinny: sorry.. anyways..

Both: don't forget to comment and keep reading!

Jinny: I wanted to say that...

Mars: shut up. Well, see ya my seductive pepperoni pizzas!or any other topping pizza. I don't know If you like pepperoni so y-

Jinny: it's my turn to say shut up.

Mars: .....