What if it wasn't this way?

Chapter 2 The First Day Part 2

The Previous chapter on "What If It Wasn't This Way"

Wake up steph! My mom said.  I walk out of my room and everyones looked at me amazed. Do you guys like it? Yes!They all say. Come on steph I'm taking you to tims for breakfast. When we got to tims I ordered and egg muffin and some hot chocolate. Like always I broubht it to school it makes me popular. We left to go to school it was very big. I walked into room 13 and sat down in the 2nd to the last row. Three girls came and one named Oliva said hi.Oliva told me to get out of "her"spot. I said This spot is supposed to be my spot . Even the sun says it. The sun might say it but the teacher says its my seat. Stephine thought of somthing to say but nothing  came to her head she thought that maybe if she wins this fight she get really popular. But what would she say? Oliva calls the teacher and stephine has to think of a quick comeback. Now everbody is looking. I blurt out somthing that I never thought to say. YOUR BUSTED!
 

                                                         

           I just wanted to point out that i made the preivous chapter story desription exactly 200 words:):)

What is going on here girls? Shes sitting in the spot I normaly sit and I kindly (she kinda sqealed when she said kindly) told her to move somwhere else but she only moved her mouth. Well...the teacher said I guess since shes new we could let her sit there now and maybe tommorrow however sits there first gets to sit there. Miss lily I was assinged this spot. That was last year. In grade 6 you start to get your class teacher changed so for science you'll have a different teacher. Oooo  I'll miss you she said in a not obivous sarcastic way. Ok now the bell will ring soon so everyone get to your seats and remeber you will never be assinged a seat. They nodded and  started talking again . Inside of Stephine she felt happy she had won the first day of school fight and everyone was looking and whispering at the girl named Oliva and the other two twins decided to somwhere not close to her and some people did a small giggle then a bell rang and every one stood up so she stood up too. Some kind of song was playing and was not sure but after there was a myserious vocie that started talking and it said the song was the national anthem. After the  mysterious voice stoped talking the Miss Lily called the attendance and asked who has never been to this school. Of course evreryone put up their hand. No I mean if you've never been to the primary school sorry I should have explained it that way then. Stephine and another girl put up their hand. Ok two people? Why don't you come up here and interduce yourselfess. The other slowly walked to the front when steph nearly ran to the front. Um,the shy girl said I'm Naomi and I'm turning 11 years old on October 31. Oh my gosh so am i except my birthday is on December 31 She said inside her head. Um I'm born on December 31st and turning 11. Everybody's mouth were open far enuogh to hit the ground. I could fit the biggest t.v. in their mouths. Now go sit down girls. Lets get to some work now! Naomi said hi and looked away

I just wanted to say I made it exactly 600 words not including these bold words. Just these bold words :):)$$