I'm sorry if this poem is crappy. I feel its crappy but please tell me what you think it needs or is it good or not. Be honest, I want to hear you opinions.
Daddy why did you hit me ?
What did I do to make you so mad?
Why did you and mommy fight?
I tried covering my ears
But i could still hear.
I'm afraid
I feel tears coming down my cheek
Why daddy
Why mommy
Why do you guys hate me
Why?
I ranned to my room
Prying to god
Praying for him to help me
I pray so he could make me a bird
So I could fly away
So I could runaway from this nightmare
So I could be free
And see the nice blue sky
I closed my door
Turned off the night
And pryed
Prayed he wouldn't come in
Prayed that he will leave
I prayed he would just no do it again
I grabbed of hold of my stuffed wolf
He is my best friend
He will help sleep in peace
I hide in my closet
I see him through the little crack
He won't leave
He calls my name
And won't stop
I wish I could fly
Fly away
From this nightmare
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EMOTIONS
Non-FictionThis is about I feel. True emotions, and sometimes it will be about how others feel or how I see others feel