Name ➸ Stormtail
Nice! A little bit boring on the suffix though...
Reason ➸ He was born during a long storm.
Kind of like stormkit ( crookedstar)! Cool!
Gender ➸ Male
Nice!
Age ➸ 27 moons
Pretty young
Rank ➸ Warrior
Great
Clan ➸ RiverClan
I love RiverClan!
Appearance ➸ a dark grey tabby tom with green eyes. His tail seems to be a darker shade
of grey than the rest of his fur
Interesting! Not to crazy, but not to plain.
Personality ➸ Stern, impatient, ambivert. He seems to always know what to do unless a weird situation comes out of the blue
Nice! But maybe add a few more positive things
Kin ➸ Sunstrike(brother), Stoneshard(Brother), Silverfoot(mother), Goldenflash(father, deceased)
I love the name Goldenflash!
Crush ➸ Mothpelt
Also a bit boring, but okay.
Backstory ➸ He always bounced from mentor to mentor, due to them not wanting to apprentice him or they died.
Aww! How sad.
His father, Goldenflash, died after Silverfoot's second litter was delivered,
How did he die?
and Stormtail and Sunstrike had to watch him be dragged into the camp
Awww! The backstory seems a bit short, so maybe work on that.
8/10
The name was a bit boring, and the back story was a bit to short.. but over all a pretty good character! I would love to see his backstory expanded on!
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