Louis Tomliston is my brother ( one direction fanfiction)

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(btw Lola is 10) Lola was walking to her favorite food place, Nandos, when she came across Louis Tomlison he waved at Lola and said " hi whats your name? "

" oh well im Lola Tomliston"

" wait a second" they said in unison

They gasped and huged each other

" I have not seen you since that plane crash 9 years ago!

"how have you been Lou? "

" My search party is still looking for you"

" search party! those cost a fortune! "

" you havent heard of me? im in a band and i got enough money to hire a search party for you"

"whoa well lou can u help me? "

Lola burst into tears. Bawling in her hands.Louis picks up Lola)

"what happend Emily i will make it better"

" well remember our dad"

" yea why"

" after the crash dad took me but he couldnt find you or mom so he took me home.He was depressed and got drunk and started to abuse me"

" Lola show me where he hurt you! "

Louis had his serious face because he cared about his sister that he had not remembered after the crash.

Lola lifted her shirt to her rib cage and Louis saw a HUGE bruis on her. Louis said

" does this hurt? " and touched it

" LOUIS STOP STOP IT HURTS!!!!!

"im sorry Lola! "

"lets get you to the hospital sis"

" what for im useless i have no point of living"

" you do because i love you and you will have some one to love back "

" I love you too Lou but i have no home"

"WHAT? WHY? "

" dad, well our dad"

" HE KICKED YOU OUT?! "

" thats what dad did today, he got even more drunk than usuall and befor he kicked me out he beat me up "

" C'mon lets go get the lads and take you to the hospital to heal your rib cage

(AT HOSPITAL)

"this nurse will take you to a room to clean your cut up. Okay?

" okay lou "

" be brave Lola"

"i will"

nurse takes to room)

Louis waits in waiting room )

nurse comes out)

"hmm. Louis Tomliston? "

stands up neviouly) " yes? "

" your sister Lola will need stitches and you may see her "

Louis walks to her room) " Lola? "

" yes? "

" are you okay? do you need anything? "

" no thanks Lou "

" will you be brave for me when you are getting your stiches? "

"if you will stay in the room"

" okay Lola i will ask if i can but i dont know if i can"

"but lou! "

" it will be okay just ket me ask a nurse"

walks out of room ) " hello nurse?"

" yes?"

" can i stay in the room whike she is getting her stitches? "

"yes its fine"

" thank you "

walks back to Lolas room ) " okay Lola i will stay in here with you "

" thanks Lou"

( after stitches)

"Mr.tomliston? "

" yes? "

" your sister has to take a nap to take away the pain in her chest after her stitching"

" okay how long will the nap take? "

" hmm.about 30 minuets"

"okay"

" feel free to wait in the waiting room or go home to pick her up tomorrow"

" i will wait for her"

" okay"

( 30 minuts later Lola comes out of room )

" hi lou"

" hi lola do you want to meet my band mates? "

"okay louis :-) "

drives home)

" hi harry, zayn, niall, and liam i wanna show you somebody"

" okay " they all say

" meet my long lost sister "

Lola blushed and smiled ) "hello "

" hey Louis why did it take you so long to get here? " asked niall

" i had to take Lola to the hospital"

" why? "

" well our dad abused her when he was drunk witch was every night"

" that turd" says harry

"every one i need to talk to you in privit but its a suprise for Lola so i cant tell you so wait here, okay? "

" okay lou" and smiled :-)

( two minuts later)

" okay Lola you ready for the big suprise? "

"yea"

" welcome to the band!!! "

hands Lola a microphone)

" really lou? "

" yep really! "

"sing for us Lola! )

" okayyyy "

many lalalas and nananas later)

AMAZING!!!

ok i will make another one tomorrow but i cant finish the rest srry :( and btw no haterzzz

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⏰ Last updated: Jul 31, 2012 ⏰

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