Something flickered inside my mind, I awoke and a whirring sound burst from my ... chest? Wait, where was my chest? I looked around the room, something was odd. I saw dark, pixelated dashboards and chairs, and realized I was alone.
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Just a laptop
Science FictionAnother high school story, its rather terrible especially with pacing and general dialogue. I love and hate this story about a raider teen finding a laptop with a human contentiousness stuck inside. It was around 12 pages long when I stopped writing...
The unnecessary prologue hook thing
Something flickered inside my mind, I awoke and a whirring sound burst from my ... chest? Wait, where was my chest? I looked around the room, something was odd. I saw dark, pixelated dashboards and chairs, and realized I was alone.