Better Left Unsaid

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I've got like 10 drafts and don't know what to put the most effort into. Here are the drafts, which Ever gets the mot comments gets more attention, and no this book is not abandoned just struggling a bit is all.

BE MY MOON AND STARS

Lune's cannon voice ^

First things first, Better Left Unsaid is still in the works. I just have a lot if other drafts to make and finish. Anyway, this story is inspired by 's Be Mine and Mine Alone, the only difference is that Nightmare will not be with Error and Error is kinda apart of Nightmares gang. Godstale is my own creation and if there is one already named that I didn't know.

Godstale is similar to Dreamtale as it has two Sans running it, but it has its differences. Also Godstale is heavily inspired by MLP. I am also using the Forced God of Destruction in here but adding a few new things, all of the 'Gods' used to live together. Raised by the higher deities (Fate, Destiny, Luck, and Hope). But their memories were suppressed and they were separated once they began to fight with each other. Harrish6's version of Error was pulled out of his AU (Stringtale), but I'm changing it a tiny bit. Once Error was pulled away he was reformed into a child and raised beside Ink, Nightmare, Dream, Lune, and Soleil. The original story of Errors past goes that he was chosen because his AU was different, but my version is that error was chosen because his AU was happy so Fate was a asshole and chose him. The reason a destructive force was made was to balance everything out, Destiny raised him. Fate raised Ink, Luck raised Dream and Nightmare, and Hope raised Lune and Soleil. Nightmare and Lune met by accident, and continued to secretly meet up and play together. But as time, went on hey grew more attached to one another and promised to get married once they were appointed to there roles.

But as Soleil began taking Lune's spotlight, and he pretended not to mind, but he did. And once he had enough he fought with him, and Nightmare sided with him and fought as well. Once they were banished their home became unstable, so their memories were erased or replaced and they forgot their childhood. Except for Lune, Fate took his rage out on him and made him remember, so Lune made his kingdom away from his brother as he felt like it was his fault for what had happened even if Soleil didn't remember. Nightmare still has a feeling that someone important to him is missing, even if he won't admit it.

Lune

Lune is the French word for moon. So that is one of their names. He represents the moon. The moon is a symbol of femininity, modesty, motherhood, and healing. So that is Lune's personality, but he is also rather shy and quite. He is nocturnal and cherishes all life above his own. His kingdom is also nocturnal, the plant life and animals are the same. Most of the landscape is lush forest and bodies of water. There are floating islands as well, all of which are over the Crystal ocean. There called the Floating Isles

His bones are black, on the center of his hands are white stars. His wings are feathered, the top layer is black, the second layer is deep purple. He has a short tail, about three inches long. Along with clawed toes and fingers. His spine is royal purple and his ribs have a gradient to his sternum. On the center of his sternum is a white crescent moon shape. He has oval shaped eyes that are outlined with navy blue and his eye lights are white shine shapes. He has a very feminine body and voice. Lune is okay with any pronoun but his title is Queen. Also he has a complete mouth of fangs, but they are retractable. His blush is a mix of deep blues and purples and the harder he blushes it begins to sparkle. He becomes depressed when others ask about his past and cries when asks about his brother, believing that he is the sole reason for his brother's grief. He has the ability (similar to Dream and Nightmare) to enter the Dream Realm, saving people from their nightmares and giving advice, even for Soleil.

Soleil

Soleil is the French word for Sun. The Sun is symbol of masculinity and strength. So he is that, purely dominant and in control, also extremely paranoid. This of course goes to his head and he automatically take the spotlight, which is one cause of why Lune left. Soleil thinks that Lune is trying to take over but in all actuality he isn't, Lune is perfectly happy in his little empire, but Soleil says it's total bull. The Sun Empire is militarily strong and all, but the land is poor from over farming. The mines are almost dry and the cities are crowded. Many of the plains are ruined and taken over by settlers. Many of the floating islands are low to or have crashed into the ground because of people mining the levitation crystals that allow the masses to fly, some have been completely removed causing mountain ranges and landslides. Manufacturing and industrial factories have caused problems as well, such as endangering animals and plant life along with poor air quality. Many of the old forts are abandoned and house outlaws and such.