My severe apologies everyone, but this story will be discontinued.
The reason why is because I believe the story is absolutely all over the place. There's no reason why the mother abuses both Pastel and Alex. There's no cause of the father's death or how Pastel and Alex are involved with it.
And I remember saying that it's a love and emotional story, but it's not like that. The love in this story isn't heavily used. This story is supposed to be somewhat a Granny type of situation, trying to escape before it escalates.
I also thought that is that the only plot? Just a pair of siblings trying to flee from home?? They flee from home, AND THEN WHAT?
I'm absolutely sorry for publishing this story without it fully thought out.
I hope you have a great day.
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RomancePastel and Alex work in a small cafe to get extra money, just to get away from their emotional abusive mother. Do they succeed?
