The Pit

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17 year old Max Chambers was getting firewood in the forest to fuel the fire they had made while his 17 year old girlfriend Amanda Wethers (who went by Anastasia Storm around her friends, for who all knows why) was sitting by the fire. "Hey Max! You getting the fire wood?" She yelled, 'yeah I'm coming right over Ana' , (he clearly had the wood so the answer was obvious.) "You might as well come over here anyways I wanna show you something." Max hearing those words dropped the firewood near the fire pit and jogged over to where she was leaning against a tree to bent on his knee and bow, 'you have summoned your noble knight?' Max said, hiding a smug grin during his bow. "Shuddup Max!" Amanda laughed, playfully pushing Max while he was still on his knee, he got up to see her face to face, she...was...beautiful, his cheeks turned a deep shade of red and he couldn't help but look at those...eyes.

Oh those eyes those eyes. Those magnificent Chocolate brown eyes, he watched them and saw her pupils becoming smaller and smaller as he shone his flashlight near her face to brighten the area up from the lack of wood in the now dying fire, and her golden hair was something indescribable, and he loved her outfit too. Her striped grey skirt and her black stockings matched her shirt lovely. He picked the shirt out himself from a cheap corner store for her birthday last month, and he wished he could give the designer of the shirt a freaken gold medal. It was a light grey tank top, with a big grey kitten on it, the kitten was holding its paws up in a position underneath where the breasts would be. The kitten had a speech box next to it that said, -Why have the pussy when you have these mews?-. As I said, spectacular work on the designers part...

"Max" , 'Yeah Ana?', Max said, stumbling over his own words. "You're dazing out again Max." 'Ah, I am aren't I?' Max said, trying to get a giggle out of her so he could see her beautiful smile. "Max, there's something I found in the forest earlier today, I texted Madeline but she couldn't tell me shit from what I described to her." 'Babe what do you want me to do, if Madeline couldn't come up with shit I won't be able to get anything either. So why don't you just forget about it and come sit by the fire with me?', Max explained, trying to get his point across that he wanted some cute cuddling time with his little kitten. "Wait, Max, last time I looked the fire had died from a lack of wood, so why is is back?" 'I don't know Ana.' "But Max, I did hear that these woods have been rumoured to be...haunted." Amanda had a serious look on her face, but Max didn't take this seriously and snuck behind her. He then grabbed her with his hood pulled over his head laughing, 'Oooooo I'm a ghost Im-a gonna get you!' Amanda turned and lightly shoved him back while she giggled all the same. "I'm being serious Max." She said sternly, quickly becoming poker-faced. "I think there is someone In that forest."

Suddenly, the fire froze, like, literally froze mid movement, and the flames stood perfectly still, and before Amanda or Max could move, a slow moving groggily image of a man made of fire appear from the hottest depths of the flames,

"yOU ARE NOT  sAfE HERE.  RUN, HIDE, BEfORE IT GETs yOU-OU-OU....qUIcKLy NOW, GO TO DRTHsEflBEAOfJcH"

' What, the fuck, was that.' Max asked a fear-stained Amanda. Thought she couldn't answer because she was turning white in the face and her bright brown eyes had shrunken down to the size of ants. About two minutes later, she responded. "Max, why did that THING appear in our fire!" She quivered, still frozen in place. Max helped her to the large oak log they had placed beside the fire, which had gone back to normal after the encounter with the fire-ghost 'Ana, w-was that the ghost you saw in the forest?' Max said with a weak and scared tone. "Yes, but t-the one I s-saw was made of gas and leaves." 'We have to try and figure out w-what this thing is.' Max told her with a slight stutter.

END OF PART 1

Please favorite and like this if you enjoyed this is my first story so there may be some mistakes. Thanks for all the support guys on my first story and enjoy chaper 2 "The Match"! Thanks again! Caper Kramer

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