the hotel

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Jin and I finally arrive at the hotel. My heart kept beating faster than a cheetah. I was so nervous to go inside the hotel. There were police cars all around us because a murder just hapoened.

Insight on Jimin and Jin's mom and dad: (third person P.O.V)
Jin was 6 and Jimin was 4, when they came over heard their parents talking about how they need to give jimin away. His mother wanted to keep him because it's her baby, but it wasn't her husband's.  Jin and Jimin's mother was raped and got pregnant. No one knows who's Jimin's biological father is but  jin's dad wanted an abortion. Jimin's mother wanted to have the baby because she didn't want to end a baby's life. After having jimin, her husband was still not Happy. He kept saying "either you get rid of him, or I leave the family. " Jimin's mother begged him to let her raise her baby for at least the first four years of his life.  He agreed. When jimin finally reached the age 4, jimin's mother unfortunately had to give jimin away, but she didn't want him to be alone in the foster home. So she decided to send jin too. Jimin's mother told jin everything before she sent him off. Even though jin was just 6 he understood. Jin promised his mother to never tell jimin that his "father"  isn't his father. Now Jimin 17, and Jin 18, are at the scene of the murder of their parents. And jin is about to tell jimin the big secret.
Back to the story in Jimin's P.O.V (what it was originally)

"Jimin... I need to tell you something before we go inside." Jin said to me worried. I really didn't want to hear what he wanted to say, I just wanted to go to the hotel room and try to find a note that my mother probably left for me.
" I don't want to hear it okay, let's go inside." I demanded
"No Jimin-" before my brother could finish I go inside.
"JIMIN WAIT!" He yells and starts to run after me.

I run all the way to the room that it happened in. When I went in, I remember seeing blood everywhere...

 Looking at the blood, I followed the trail and I look to see the blood was coming out from my mother's head

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Looking at the blood, I followed the trail and I look to see the blood was coming out from my mother's head. I couldn't control my emotions. I get down on my knees, getting mother's blood on my jeans .  I start crying like I've never did before, I kept put one hand on her bloody fingers, and the other on her cheek...
" Why did you leave me *cries* Was I a bad kid? *snuffles* After all this time I wanted to see you again... But not like this.."
I couldn't stop crying...
"OH HOLY SHIT" My brother says looking at the bloody scene

Jin walks around the hotel room, and I look at him all confused

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Jin walks around the hotel room, and I look at him all confused. What could he be doing?
I thought to myself.
"Hyung what are you doing ?" I asked out curiosity with tears in my eyes.
"You said it yourself, Mom probably let a note for us, let's look for it." My brother says with a smile and tears in his eyes.
I get having blood all over me and start looking around. Jin goes inside the bathroom while I check for any clues by the beds behind the TV. Ugh there's nothing here... Where else could it be. Ahhh yes the closet I haven't checked there. I thought to myself.

I open the closet for and I see my father full of blood and bullet holes all over this chest. I remember when I was on my knees next to my mother there weren't any bullet holes? Did the murderer kill my parents in two different ways? How is this possible? I asked myself.
I wasn't too attached to my dad as I was to my mom. I always had the feeling he didn't like me. So I didn't bother crying for him even though I did tear up. I looked inside the closet and I see this piece of paper on the shelf. Unfortunately I couldn't reach it.
"Hyung! I found something come here."
Jin runs to me and says
"What did-" he cuts himself off and looks down and sees our father on the floor. Unlike me, my brother gets down on his knees crying. Jin was really close to dad, and dad always seemed to enjoy Jin's presence. Which made me jealous.
"Jin get up, look up there, I think that's the note."
Jin gets up, still in tears, and gives me the piece of paper.

I was right. I knew my mother would leave a note for me and my brother. I unfold the paper and read a loud :
Dear Jiminie and Jinnie,
It's your mother. I firstly wanted to say I'm sorry for leaving you guys at a young age. At an age where a child needs there mother. Even though I did have to give you guys up, I never stopped loving you ever. I always made sure you guys were alright. That's why we practically lived in this hotel for 13 years, surprising they let us stay. You guys grew up in front of my eyes even though I didn't get to raise you. Now I have something I want to say to Jiminie. I don't know how old you are going to be when your reading this, but there's something you need to know. I am your mother, but your father isn't your father. Jiminie, your mother was raped. That's why your "father" wanted to give you away. He didn't want children that weren't his. I'm so sorry Jiminie, you probably feel really terrible now. I don't want you think your father didn't love you. After we gave you and jin away, your "father" didn't just miss jin, he missed you too. We wanted to take you guys back but they wouldnt allow us. I hope you understand jiminie. Your biological father is still a mystery honey , but please don't go trying to search for him. He obviously wasn't a good man. I love you lots and I miss you.
~ Love ,
Your mother

After reading the note, my eyes were overflowing with tears, and they kept dripping down my face, making the note wet.

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