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I lie next to Gail as he plays with my hair. Twirling it through his fingers like it's spun gold, when it couldn't have looked more opposite. My dark brown almost black hair contrasted my ivory pale skin suprisingly well. My eyes, eyes Gail described as precious emeralds. I looked over to the beautiful man I was soon to marry. His mahogany hair reached just past his eyebrows, and his amber eyes shone as he caught me staring. As i ran my hands over my satin bed sheets he smiled at me showing teeth like pearls. "You know your awfully beautiful when you blush." He smirked and gave me a tiny peck on the lips.
Our small moment was interrupted by a tentative knock on the door. "Come in Marianne!" I groaned, knowing who it was.
"Sorry to intrude Mistress Isabelle and Master Gail, but you both must ready for the ball" She stated.
That's right, our engagement ball was tonight. I had forgotten after the lovely day Gail and I had. We had strolled in the gardens for hours. I smiled when I thought of how he had picked every beautiful flower in sight.
"A bouquet of the loveliest flowers for the loveliest woman."
"Just stunning." I had said with a grin.
"Although none compare to you" He'd whispered with a wink. I started to walk closer to him humming the tune I was soon to walk down the isle to. I brushed my lips against his, then turned and took off through the garden at a sprint.
"Oh no! A runaway bride!" He exclaimed.
"So come and catch me!" I shouted teasingly. I could hear his heavy foot falls behind me, and knew he was catching up. I slipped off my uncomfortable slippers and kept running, now laughing hard.
All of a sudden I felt muscular arms around me and heard Gail whisper in my ear "Your not getting away that easy Princess." And i could almost see the smile that would be lingering on his lips. I had kicked and struggled but he still managed to carry me up to my chambers bridal style.
I sat up, being awakened from my daydream by Gail leaving the bed we had been snuggling in moments before. He took my hand and kissed it "I will see you tonight my beautiful Isabelle." He said it so formally I couldn't help but to giggle, and with a sly smile he left.
"He's a keeper Mistress Isabelle, that's for certain." Marianne said with a smile.I was startled, forgetting she was even in the room. She had been my lady in waiting as long as i could remember, and she was like a mother to me considering I had never had one. Marianne was a tall slender woman with chin length hair that was graying over time. She had kind, wise eyes. I always followed her advice, but this time i didn't need it. I loved Gail, and he loved me. That was that. With a sigh I twirled across my large bedroom and gave her a hug saying, "I know Marianne, I know."
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These Violet Eyes
FantasyIsabelle is the princess in the kingdom of Trahirin. She will become Queen when she marries her fiance, Gail. Her father was first in line for the throne, then he fell in love with a mysterious woman from a small town on the outskirts of Trahirin...