The day i met you....(Rye Beaumont)

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Brook's POV

Today is just a chill day for us I'm watching The Lion King with Jack, Rye is making tea (as always), Andy is out on a walk with Mikey. After the movie finished I got up to take a shower when the door opened it was Blair "Hi Blair" "Hey brook are you and the boys busy I've got a surprise for all of you but mainly you." (thoughts are in italics) a surprise for me what is it "Um... no Blair we're not busy I mean I was gonna take a shower but never mind it can wait" "Okay. Boys I have a surprise for you all" Blair said as he walked in the boys looked just as confused as me. "Hey Brooky, Rye, Andy, Mikey, and jack" My older sister Alysa walks through the door to the living room/Mindy room "OMG Lysa" I yell as I run to her and engulf her in a warm hug.

Rye's POV

And there she is my crush...wait no rye you can't think like that she is your best mate's older sister..but she is so cute "Umm...RYE you zoned out you ok?" Her angelic and caring voice said to me " er yeah just um... thinking I missed you." I said as I was pulled into a warming hug " I missed you too Rye Pie" Alysa smirked as she whispered in my ear earning me a death glare from brook.

Alysa's POV

After me and my crus... I mean rye pull away I feel cold but I don't show it He is so hot no Alysa stop that is Brooklyn best friend... but he is so hot. I can see brook giving rye a death glare so I give brook one after I hugged Mikey, andy, and jack. "alright then I supposed I best be off Alysa if they do anything wrong come tell me ok" Blair said whilst looking at me. I just nodded and then he left just like that. I then said "Ok then boys I will be off to see my room so if you need me ill be there." after that i just walked straight down the hallway and saw two open doors I'm guessing those are rye's and brook's room ok then I spot another door that is shut I open it then see my room the walls are lilac and one wall has wallpaper that has books on it the bed is a double bed with some New York bedding on it. Also, it has a small desk in the corner for my laptop and a vanity desk for all my makeup also I have an en suite. I know I'm gonna love it here

So what do you think about this part (probably that it's trash) Niteworld inspired me to start writing a story I love your work especially sucker for blood and words painted in blood so if you are reading this I doubt you are I love your work and stories Anyways I hope you enjoyed again let me know if I've done anything wrong cause as I said I am still new to writing stories. Bye Hayley.