Chicago,
There I was on my bed when the sunset was coming up I know that today I am going to take the test.The aptitude test that put me in a factions, there are five factions only one I can belong in. the test will decide all my life if I am with family or do I relinquish them. The five factions are Abnegation, Candor, Erudite, amity or Dauntless. I got up and went where my mom is standing, where she was prepare to cut my hair and put it on a knot, she got her scissors and started cutting my hair, I saw my hair falling piece to piece on the ground.she opened up the mirror and I saw my reflection, I’m sixteen, my mom close the mirror and then I left to take the test, I went with my brother Caleb Prior walking. He always help people I think he might be abnegation. Caleb said “to relax and trust the test” how can I trust the test but I know that I will have to am I Abnegation, Candor, Erudite, amity or Dauntless I don’t know yet.”yahoo!whoo!” I saw the dauntless jumped out of the train and enter the building that gives me a smile, I enter the building where this woman around 40 talked about the history………………… I stand in hallway facing my brother I was ready for the test i walk in. I meet tori the one who is going to put the test for me she sit me down and then she gave me a glass that looked like water,I drank it and then the glass was empty. I heard this wind I didn’t she tori I looked around I look at me at the mirror and then I saw there were thousand even millions of me. “this is scary” I thought and then my refection came up and said “choose a knife or a piece of meat before it too late” I said “what I’m going to do” and then I saw a dog maybe a wolf and then I look back I didn’t see nothing I walk slowly backward and then he attack me.”this isn’t real and then I fell on my knee and then I say him as a little dog and then he became a big one he chase the little girl and I ran after him and I jump. I woke up tori was shocked she picked me up and throw me out I ask “what were my result?” and she said “Abnegation, Candor, and Dauntless” I said” that impossible” tori said “ it is they call it divergent you can’t let them know if so they kill you say to your family I sent you home because you are sick good bye” I went home and start cutting food Caleb came and ask “what happen to you today “and I said “ I felt bad and they sent me home” I’m a bad liar I can’t do it but I have to I can’t even tell my family or friends he asked “what were your result” and I answer “what were yours” he laugh and then my mom and dad came and help me and we ate my dad said “why did you l just leave” I said “ I was sick” I wash dishes and my dad said “we love you” that touch my heart and I started hugging them. I walked to the area where we will have to take the test, the final test, I saw the lady the one who is in charge. A tall blond woman who looks like 50 her name is Jeanine. My dad and Jeanine talked then my mom told me to go to our family spot. I talked to this lady I never know her name but we had a conversion”hey” hello? “I said “so what factions do you think you are in “she asked “ I said “I don’t know what about you “I said she laugh” same thing as you” she laughed again I fake laugh “well I have to go” she said “ me too” I said I left jeez some people Jeanine stared to talk i tuned her out but then I heard “the future is in your hands” and then we started i sit waiting some of these name are weird but I can’t judge nobody my name is Beatrice that is extra weird I laugh in my head. Caleb Prior I heard my brother just sit there and then he got up cut his hand and drop the blood in to white bowl but nothing came then he said” Erudite “and then he said “Beatrice prior” I got up my heart is beating so so fast I got up I got to the front got the knife cut my hand and put it in the rock he said it to so loud “DAUNTLESS” I went to the seat available. “well you to choose dauntless “I saw next to me “yea I did” I had a big question umm “how do I say this” "yea what your name “I said in a small whisper”Beatrice”I said “ Beatrice what a beautiful name I wish my name was like that and not that wired my name is arvi” I said “call me tries” “sure doo” she said I just laugh and she did to in my heart now I know that I made a new friend. When we were done the dauntless took us to some place called the lone train. I stop and thought the lone train? “run” said arvi” I looked up everyone is running to catch up to the train I ran I just don’t feel like myself no more I tried to catch up I ran and ran and ran “tahini jump half in the train half and half not I tried to pull myself I just said “help” a young man looking like 23 said “if any of you guys help her you will be thrown out of dauntless I whisper to arvi ”help” she looked at me but did not said a word when the man yell “come with me dauntless group and I’ll show you what way you should take to be like me A dauntless leader” I had one finger nail on the train almost falling when arvi help me get up she said “next time be careful for what you choose and what challenge u pick” I said “thank for the advice” almost with no breath she said “lets catch up” I heard the same man again just saying “jump like this “and he jump high almost above the train and he fell in his feet “now you do it or you be factionless forever “MOVE” I Said don’t want to be factionless I jumped I fell right into the rocks in my knee bleeding into pain I easily got up and dust myself. Everyone jump one kid jump but he had a textbook weight almost like 2 pound we just saw him went down and down boom “great -1” “my name is Enzi one of the weirdest name ever so call me Frederic that mean LEADER or you can just call me freed” so this is what we doing its easy its only one step “be brave” “now jump of this cleft who want to go first” I’ll go first I raise my hand it easy I said ill just jump and fell nothing I said I stood up about to fall “STOP” I heard arvi said she went up push me in the rock and said “ill jump first” and she jump higher than anything and I just saw her go down with no scream she went down and down. Without anyone knowing I jump to the rescue only when I found it there a net. I say arvi talking to this guy name four. Let’s go. Arvi was talking to this guy name jojo I came and talk to him we became the best of friend. Jojo and I stared bring more and more closer he said “ like you so cute your cuter then all the stars in the sky above “I said thank you you’re so sweet but I’m thinking I’m umm how do I put this I don’t like you your just a friend and I don’t think I’ll like you the same way I’m sorry” its ok he said but I know it wasn’t fatly I got up walk screaming in my room I kept screaming and screaming **flashback** mom stop I didn’t $50 of you dresser I promise “stop lying your rice “she said “my name not rice ITS BEATRICE” I said “it may choose if I want to call you rice or Beatrice” she said “stop it mom” “ I’m deb not your mom you stealer” “please stop mom I’m getting tired of you” <<flashback ends>> jojo came closer “stop” I yell “leave me alone” “stop” “tris you don’t have to be afraid I’m here” jojo said “die I say die and never come back “I said “I only said your pretty” “die I say” jojo left running*******ash finally a good sleep what happen to …….”four we got a dead in the pot” I ran “jojo I said” there he was hang from the pole of the pot some people call it the bucket but it’s a pot as they call it I reamer yesterday but I was in shocked “HOW COULD THIS HAPPEN”I said “ tris lets go I know jojo was your best friend come on” four said “NO LET ME STAY” but he pick me up and put me in the clinic bed they got a shot and********6:30 it was all a dream I have to find jojo arvi came beat the nurse up and let me go she said” reamer you have to stand up and order to sit down “I stood there and thought four came in and said ”jojo has…sic” ”I know” I said “I’m so soar…” “I don’t want to talk about it” I said “he die at 9:10” “I said to stop talking about it can’t you understand” I said four said “I know you mad and sad about what happen to job..” bang arvi got a cup of water made of glass and hit it with four head “arvi” I said “ what you said that you don’t want to talk about it” “that the second person” “well hope they both die” “arvi don’t think like that I did the same thing and look at me here I said the same thing to my mom look now she dead” “it’s true both can just die” “arvi you know I like four” “I’m sorry didn’t know that ill help you “she can with a bucket of water it look so cold that the bucket was frozen arvi came and thrower it to four and she came with a boiling I mean boiling water and drop it at the nurse “well let’s try and experiment” she said I laugh “let’s go “I said arvi looked at me closely and said “I know you’re a divergent” “ no I’m not arvi why would you think like…” “I just know you are” “fine I am” “your what “Fred came “umm she said that she is… a zombie ”arvi said “yeah I’m a zombie” I said lifting up my and going right to left up and down “it’s a play called umm monster attack” arvi said “and they were only 5 part and the last 2 were umm zombie and umm wolf” I said and arvi said” and I wanted to be the wolf and tris wanted to be the wolf and then she said fine I am” fred said” ohm ok what the time of the play and when” “they haven’t tell us the time yet” “tell me when ok” fred came and talked to Jeanine. Jeanine came and said “come with me” “no” I said “come” Jeanine said “never” gourdes they came and took tris away” arvi came put four push her away **meanwhile at with tris** “what do you want from me ”tris said “I want to learn more about you” Jeanine said “okay then ask a stupid question” I said “what really happened to jojo” Jeanine said “fine you want to know the truth I killed him” I said “and what kind of are you really a in a play “jean said I gulp I’m getting tired of this thing I got up and yelled “NO I’M A DIVERGENT” Jeanine got shocked she clicked a button and they took me outside**meanwhile with arvi** “I got to save tris ”arvi said “it too much danger “four said “so we can do this we can lets go ”arvi said “DIVERGENT “ “did you hear that ”arvi said “yes and it came from Jeanine room “four said “what are we going to do ”arvi said “lets fight “four said they went walking “we in the safe house also known as Jeanine punishment “four said “wait what ”arvi said “Jeanine room “four said “four lookout” four look back hit the guards the guard falled to the ground and said “I have an I Idea”**meanwhile with tris** “stay back I know how to fight ”tris said “so do we “the guard said tris got out and tried to punch the guard “wow you really learned a lot in dauntless “the guard said “four, arvi o my god you came to save me” the guard took the helmet off yes “we…”.boom tris stared to fall to the ground “tris answer me tris “arvi said “four come ”arvi said “she has been shot “four said “let’s go come on” “no never” arvi fell to the ground and whisper in tris ear “it’s all my fault tris I’m so sorry and I wanted to know that if you were a divergent because I am to” arvi said arvi came and went up the ladder “wait this can’t be right ”arvi thought arvi went down and she got a gun she went inside to Jeanine room and said “miss me bitch “and shot her right in her chest “ahh”Jeanine yell in pain “one shot for me the other BOOM for tris the other BOOM for four the other one (shot again) for divergent the other (shot again) because I hate you” arvi said and then she left “let’s go before they find out” arvi said “no I don’t want to leave “said four “four are you ok” arvi said “I liked tris a lot and I want to die with her “four said “fine if you want to die with her ”arvi said she took out the gun “are you sure you want me to kill you” arvi said “yes “four said arvi pull the trigger and it hit four in his heart and he fell arvi stared to get up the ladder she reload the gun arvi got up and stared walking in the roof then she jumped off she stared running and running and running she ran something look the same “the train” arvi said she jumped on the train. She stared to see all the great memory. The train then stopped at a place name the clip “the clip” she got off and then took of her guard uniform it was once white but now it full of blood. the sky looked darker like smoke and then arvi reamer “factionless” she entered a house “we will win” “how” “in the night” arvi knocked “hello” **whisper** “what are you doing here” “where the heck is your manner jeez I entered this house today its difficult I killed my owner then my friend then someone shot my bestfriend it’s a long story and my name arvi any problem” “my name ken I’m the leader this is all the group” “cool what are you fighting for” arvi said “faction stuff” ken said “I’m in” arvi said “whatever so here the plan half go inside the other half stay outside then we send a code the code is gin stand for get inside now let began” they brought a big stack of white clothes arvi thought” uniform guard uniform “ we all put a uniform now let’s go attack they all jumped in the train “what faction were you in” ken said “dauntless” I respond then I looked back in the dark ness I could in see him but now I can he eyes are so big and ahh I hate love in the first sight “so you know how to get in” ken said “ umm yeah sure “ arvi said “show us” ken smile his dimple showed “ok follow my lead “I said I jumped off so then everyone “ are we all here” lets began they stared shooting and putting bomb the place explode and they killed everyone “we done we won” someone said “hold on there more coming get reload in the rock at the corner ”arvi said they all reload “it time code now” arvi said “gin”ken said they all came “lets break up half there half the other side” arvi said they went and jumped off they shot and never end they put the big bomb and they all ran only half made it and it explode everything the half went in the train “hey you did a good job “ken said “have you ever believed in first sight” arvi said “ken said yes” it’s you” they kiss that the story about the end of the faction and how everything turn down right
