Burning Star (rewritten version)

{Chapter 13}

Previously•••••

Thunders Pov
We were blasted backward from the massive energy surge.

Now••••

Comets POV

"This is my true power," I said. I saw all their eyes had fear in them. I saw the missiles coming at me and I stood there letting them try to trap me. I released a wave of flames destroying them instantly but not the nets. Odd. I paled remembering what they are made of. Moon ore only found in craters on the moon. If they manage to make rockets out of that I am so screwed. I saw all the humans have knives made of moon ore as well. They were also in battle stance and not a flicker of fear wherein their eyes. I then used my Sharingan to cast an illusion that I was behind them. I quickly took to the air as soon as I was above the clouds I let the illusion dissipate. (A/N or if you want to go by naruto its called genjutsu). I waited for the right moment to strike right before I did  I saw another army approach but this time it was W.E.D I watched as one man take aim at someone and a dart hit my sister in the neck. I watched as my sister falls to the ground 'Dead'. Grief tore through me as my eyes changed into the Eternal magnyto Sharingan. I shot a blast of a fiery hyper beam right at W.E.D's army destroying it completely. I turned around dissipating my Angelic flame and guardians aura. I turned around trying not to cry and flew through the atmosphere. I headed towards Lania my planet my home.

Time skip to when Comet is now 10•••••••••••••

Tempest's Pov
Comet should be 10 or 11 now. The humans were betrayed by the earth and water wyverns destroying all of the humans about 7 months ago now we do not have those mind controllers but we are in chains muzzled and forced to work with little food. Sunstone is 11 now. Flare and starburst are 20 and 19 Plasma is 19 turning 20 in a couple of days. I am 18 almost 19. The earth Wyverns collecting so much moon ore turning it into heavy collars chains cages and other things to trap comet.

Comet's POV
Today is the day where I will end up getting captured remember when I looked into the future tracing through my lines to this day about 1.5 years ago. I flew down to Terra or if you want to call it Earth you can. I landed softly on the ground, not a single disturbance. I heard some movement coming from the southeast about 2-5 big creatures heading towards me. I quickly hid behind a tree and waited 2 minutes past 3 4 than a large stone head came into view I shot at him at lightning speed ripping right through his neck. I turned my tail orb into a thin blade. I waited for the next one to find me. The next one looked right at me, he was about to yell recognizing who I was before he could I slice my tail across his throat silencing him for good. The other 3 came towards him I growled in annoyance since they were all 100+ feet long and had talons half of my body length I stepped out into the open. They saw who it was they looked at me and grinned murderously one of them then said, "Well well well who do we have here." Another then said, "Comet that's who." I replied, "How long did that take you to make all 2 years I was gone?" One of them replied, "Yes it did so what." "You are kidding me right I was joking," I replied shocked. "No," the first one replied. I said, "You guys really are complete idiots." Their faces were so funny I started laughing so hard I fell onto the ground. Just as I stood up a talon came at me I ducked and rolled under came up standing. I smiled cheekily at them and said in a sing-song voice, "You missed." This went on for another 20 minutes or so before I got bored and I leaped at them with such speed they couldn't dodge within seconds they fell to the ground dead. I looked down at myself and not a single ounce of blood on me. Yayyyy.
I turned around and started walking through the forest when I saw a camp (read as an army) getting ready for me. I saw some familiar scales in obsidian prisons in the back of the camp. I then noticed there are wheels on the cages as if they were being moved to a different location.
I heard a commotion about finding someone dead. Oops, I probably should have burned there bodies. I heard someone say something about the slices look clean except for one where the body had a jagged tear in his throat. I quickly flew into the trees landing on a branch waiting for the group to pass underneath me.
     I looked into the future really quick and saw this is a 75% I do get captured and 25% I do not. I continued looking in the future to see that if I do not get captured now I will then. The percentage there is a 99.8% chance and only a .2 percent chance I get away.
I turned my tail into a hook and since they are so tall I will only manage to wait...Damn it I forgot they can change there sizes once they are fully grown so they can remain tall enough to go through the forest. I smirked slightly because one of the earth Wyverns heads will be on my tail sooner or later. I felt a tug on my tail looking down and saw an earth wyvern with the hook in his head. I dragged him up into the tree hiding him there. I saw the group starting to move again when I finished hiding the body.
I carefully grabbed the bow I made on lania, notched an arrow and fired it right at an earth wyvern about to smack my sister and brother. The arrow hit him square in the pressure point in his neck killing him instantly. I saw my siblings look around spotting me with my bow in my talons. I noticed that they were not being starved at least. I made sure I had enchanted the bow to have unlimited arrows and yes I am a magical unicorn, I have fought them. They are a pain in the ass to kill.
I got off track thinking about that and I didn't realize I was spotted, but I wasn't surprised because I looked into the future and saw this happening. I ducked and dodged putting my bow on my back like an assassin flying into the air I spun around grabbing my bow off my back pulling the string back as soon as an arrow materialized I shoot it nailing one or the 2 earth Wyverns that came at me. The arrow lodged in his head so I used a bit of magic letting out a smirk as the earth wyvern starts to spasm falling out of the sky I flicked my tail and a small asteroid hit him square in the heart killing him instantly.
I saw a giant spire of gray metal or something heading towards me as it did I activated my eternal magnyto Sharingan trying to burn the metal. I realized the one metal that can't be burned by my flames. Moon ore.
I used an evasive dove to get away from it but since it was so large I felt the negative effect it had on me causing me to feel nauseous. I flew off quickly but not without putting an arrow in the other one's head killing him.
I flew into the sky above the clouds to continue watching them. I summoned a pillar of floating platinum on the clouds so I can land and shoot my bow. I nock an arrow and aimed it right at a part of the ground where the chain is connecting my sister and brothers cell with Sunstone's.
I noticed that it struck point one and it seemed like it was hooked into the ground. Sunstone almost yelped in surprise before realizing that I had shoot the arrow. I saw the earth Wyverns get into ready stance since some were already adults they grew to there full 200 feet long size.
I noticed that the adults had also followed the trajectory from my arrow and knew I was in the area around them. I heard a rumbling voice call out, "Comet we know you around here somewhere come out NOW. I sighed in complete annoyance. I dove out of the sky and landed in front of them with my bow still out aiming 2 arrows at his head. "Let my family free or else," I growl at them. "Let us talk about this alright we are on our territory that gives us the advantage here," the older one said calmly and nicely (surprisingly).
"One problem I am a galaxy wyvern, therefore, the whole galaxy is my territory, therefore, this is my territory, "I replied. "True but I am guardian myself I have had this power for 5 eons," he replied. I looked at him in shock I exclaim "You are 5 billion years old you are the oldest grandpa in the world!" I heard chuckles even the old guy himself was chuckling.
He asks "How old are you Comet?" I replied, "10 now."
I activated my eternal magnyto Sharingan getting ready to watch what is about to happen against a gggggggggrandpaaaaaa. I called at him "Come at me, grandpa." I took off the ground flying as he yelled: "Comet get over here now or else." I sassed back "Come get me or are you too lazy grandpa."
  He roared in fury and took off after me saying I will definitely capture you now you tin midget." I replied sarcastically "Sure you can totally get me." He stopped in mid-air hovering "Are you being sarcastic?" I replied "Yep." I then took off again becoming a blur in the sky. He yelled, "Get back here!" I sassed back again "Make me."
I was above the clouds watching him look around him I noticed a small flick of his tail only thanks to my Sharingan. I started to feel nauseous and realized he could control the moon ore. I am at a huge disadvantage now. I turned around and flew off leaving the area. I stayed close by but not close enough where I could hear them. I saw the grandpa looking around carefully trying to spot my black scales in the tree. I was laying curled up on a tree watching with my flaming red eye of a Sharingan.
I got out my bow and took careful aim of the grandpa's keys for my family and friends cages. I released the string watching the black arrow go through the ring of the key holder on his tail. The arrow than flew back to me. The old moron started to look in my direction as he looked at me I grinned and held up the keys. He looked at his tail noticed the keys are gone now he looked back at me but I changed my spot. I was now by a rock that overlooked there camp. Since I had the keys and it was turning dark I had the advantage I nocked an arrow in my bow pulling the string than easing up the tension in the bowstring. I waited for another couple minutes I checked around the boulder pulling back the string and firing it quickly. I heard a  yelp of pain from a direct hit.

Grandpas pov
I felt something hit me in the shoulder from a quick fire from a bow.
A/N 2006 words in this chapter a pain in the butt to write

edited on June 20, 2019