When love Becomes The End *lovely bones*changed*

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When love Becomes The End

By: ME! XD

Okay i just wanted 1 comment on the proluges and it worked! :D XD So if i make msitakes on this 1 idc!!!! But she was totally RIGHT! So i'm never making mistakes! A LOT OF MISTAKES! Lawlz, so if this isn't good or if IT IS, then please comment i dont mind if you say bad words! JUST DON'T BEAT THE CRAP OUTTA MEH O.o

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Katlyn was short, no personality. Nice comfortable ALWAYS. I never wished to be big, hard headed, and most of all 15. I used to be 9 years old when Katyln began to draw. The best day ever that was. Now she's gone. In heaven, like mother always says. I feel horrible, sorrow inside of me. Losing my OWN , ONLY sister. forgot something, " forever..." She can't come back. I wish she could. But there will be no wishing star tonight. Or for 100 years maybe. Why don't i ask dad? I walked down the stairs to the bsaement. Where my father makes art work, for his job, and to keep at museums. " Ow i didn't see you there Super Star" he said to me laughing. " Hi dad! Dad..." i said, not knowing if i should tell him. He's still stressed about the funeral. " Yes Star?" he said. My name's Star if you never noticed. " Um... i know you're sitll stressed about the funeral of Katlyn, but i want to ask you ....When will she come back?" i said turning around up the stairs. We were silent. And when i only needed 1 step more to be upstairs he said..." Someday Star, someday." I cried and ran to my room upstairs. Locked the door. Thinking when will it be someday. Just crying and looking at her drawing notebook. I can't tell them now i said in my mind. Or should I? I looked out the window to see the old man next door. I ducked. He saw me. I peeked a little at the window, he saw me agian. But this time he jsut turned around after looking at my window and left with a garbage bag, What was in that bag?!?!? " COULD IT BE...Katlyn!" i said, maybe going paranoid. I got up without even feeling a bone. Maybe mine were dirty bones, but Katlyn is jsut a kid still, she still has Lovely Bones. I opened the door. Then i starred at the stairs. Silence filled the air. Then i ran as fast as i could down the stairs and opened the front door. " Um... i'm getting.. Ice cream! Bye!" i said to my dad. We live alone. Mother died when she ahs Katlyn. That's the most horrible day for me. And i hated the Hospital more everyday. I locked the door with my keys. Hid inside the old mans house. " Are you missing something darling?" a voice called me. I ran as fast as i could agian. This time faster and faster. Not stopping. I grabbed the garbage bag next to the front door. " HEY HEY! WHERE YOU GOING WITH THAT BAG! COME HERE LITTLE BRAT!" He yelled at me then he almmsot caught my arm but i kicked his stomach with my foot through the back. I clsoed the door. Ran through the yard. Almost knockinga trash can i unlocked the yard door. Then i was free. " Shit, i shouldn't have done that. But he's a bastard, don't worry sis. I will save you..." i said in my mind. Then i ran home. " I'm home! DAD! I GOT KATLYN!!!!!!!!" I yelled happy. Thinking " maybe he can get her back...maybe!" in my mind. " What!?!?!!? Star you need to explain this to me. Come to the kitchen i'm making "fish" " he yelled through the kitchen. The door bell rang. I looked out the hole. It was him. " DADDY!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE COME!!! DADDY! HE'S BACK! HE'S GOING TO KILL ME! LIKE HE KILLED....DADDY JSUT COME!!!! PLEASE!!!! YOU NEED TO UNDERSTAND!!!" I yelled crying my tears out. He ran to me. " Whose going to kill you STAR! TELL ME!!" He yelled. " HIM!!!!!" I yelled, pointing at the door. He opened it with a nife in his other hand. " Star?" he said. " he's there!" i said, "star!", " no please daddy he's gonna..." i looked at the door. " GONE..." I said. He carried me to his room when he locked the door. I fainted in his arms. I wasn't that big though. My life was never big, i just wish someone would understand...

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⏰ Last updated: Sep 19, 2010 ⏰

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