Run Up A Check (THE BEGINNING) REVAMP

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OKayy sorry guys my son broke my laptop so i had to wait to get it repaired and i lost EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I have a hard time remembering passwords anyhow any thoughts on the book? ofcourse this is my first book but i am not as drawn to it as i would like to be should i make a short story and end this book or let me know? Thank you for being patient and not leaving negative comments about me not updating!!!