Today is October 24, 20 3:36 Am when I start this rewrite
Hello audience new and maybe some old to the beginning of my first chapters rework now if you are née you probably should just skip but if you interested what going on well after a while of writing I really want to rewrite my older chapters (they could really improve) these chapter are from 2 years ago and I feel like I have gotten better than this older version
at this moment of time the cell saga has been completed and I have decided to start some rewrites now so I hope you enjoy new and possible old readers to this chapter rework
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A young saiyan boy I seen holding multiple bags of groceries with all kinds of different ingredients as he start walking down a path the bags are covering his view but he looking down to the ground to get some kinda of view as he continues walking he feels that he hit into something as he tip top his head all the way up to get a view over the bag he see he bumped into another sayain male
Boy: sorry I couldn't see.
Male saiyan: really how convenient you bumped into me when I was on the side walk!
The boy get a dead pan face seeing this is another dumber low class saiyan
Y/n: yes let me walk on the speeding road with no view.
The boy points to a bigger path were saiyans are fleeing at high speed are going
Male saiyan: you stupid child. my name is duran and I'm going to teach you respect for bumping into me.
Duran starts to fly at the boy with a fist ready the point holds a hand out and Duran stops for some reason the boy put down the bags of groceries next to him on the ground and stretch his arms a bit he then a throw a right hook at Duran face knocking him into the ground with some damage
Duran: that one hell of a punch. And from a child who the hell are you.
Boy: the name y/n the son of gine and bardock.
Duran: wait you mean the bardock? Forget you ever saw me!
The male saiyan flys away while holding his right cheek in pain y/n grabs the groceries and returns home to his mother gine who is currently cooking
Y/n: hey mom finally back with the grocery.
Gine: thank sweetheart leave them by the counter and clean up your room remember your father is coming back soon.
Y/n: and I get to show him how much stronger I gotten!
Y/n starts flying towards his room and see his young brother kakarot pod
Y/n: hey mom when can we let kakarot out of his pod.
Gine: he almost ready to come out I say when you father comes by we could take him out.
Y/m goes to clean his room and he picks up a bandanna his father gave him one time after he finished a mission it was white and y/n was still a toddler so it pretty important to him. After cleaning his room he goes check on his mom to see if she finish
Y/n: so from 0 to 100 percent how much of the food is done.
Gine: give it a few more minutes to boil.
Y/n: ok is it space ramen or space chicken we are having.
Gine: did you not see the list I gave you for the store?
Y/n: yeah but I'm not sure if it for tomorrow or today.
Y/n sits on a table but when he puts his fist on it his mother see it had a small bruise and panics and leave her cooking
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