The Fan

Chapter..1?

(A/N) I have no idea how this works but I think I'm doing it right.

Chapter 1 (I think again no idea how this works):

"Louis wake up!!" Harry yelled in Louis' ear

"I'M UP!" Louis yells falling off his bunk. Louis stumbles getting up then glares at Harry. 

"Heh..." Harry mumbles.

"GUYS WERE AT DETROIT! LOOK IT'S SNOWING!" Niall yelled jumping up and down.

"SNOWWWWWW!' Louis said running down the stairs of the bus but trips and flies into a pile of snow and then moans.

(A/N) I think it would sound better from a P.O.V so that's what i'll do)

(Louis P.O.V.) 

I look up to see Niall and Harry laughing and Liam glaring at me. Just then I realized how freezing it was. Hmm. I'm in a jacket. but Harry and Niall are just wearing T-shirts..... 

"Ow! Harry and Niall will you be dears and help me up?" I say. HAHAH evil plan.

"Oh no my boo-bear!" Harry says jumping out of the bus Niall following.  I put out my hands they each grab a hand and i pull them down. 

"Oops!" I say getting up. Just about when I was about t get in the bus I see  a snowball coming my way and duck. "Haha Missed me!!!!" I yell doing a happy dance then i feel a cold blob on my head. I turn around to see Liam's face covered with snow. This could only mean one thing. "SNOWW  FIGHT!!" I Yell bending over and making a snowball in the middle of the process i hear Liam yell,"FREEZE!" Damn it Liam every time. He goes over helps Harry and Niall get up and pulls us all in.

I sat at the table drinking  my tea watching the snow fall. i know kinda cliché but whatever. Then I noticed something weird. I see this girl walking along the streets. She's in a dress. What the heck?

_____________________________________________________________________________ Thats all i got for now. Somewhat cliff hanger I honestly think it's going bad. suggestions plz