When The Time Is Right (A One Direction Fan Fiction)

Chapter 18 - What?!?! They're official?

Amanda's POV

Louis looked at me and asked "Amanda will you be my girlfriend?". I was so nervous all i could do was nodd my head. I gave him the biggest hug and the most passionate kiss ever. But i noticed after that the smile fell right off Jaymie's face. I rushed over to her, i started to say "when i see that bastard i'm gonna ki-. She put her hand over my mouth to make me shutup. I followed her eyes and they were focosed right outside where there were around fifteen girls crowded around Niall, her eyes were fixed right on Niall.

Niall's POV

Leave me alone! i yelled trying to get inside domino's, but all around were just constant hate threats but one stood out to me the most. "You don't deserve a girlfriend!" That hit me like a bullet, i fell to my knees and tears just poured down my face. All of the girls ran away after they saw Jaymie standing outside the door with Louis and Amanda by her side. She quickly ran over to me just kneeling down and huging me. She finally spoke up "Niall why are you crying? Was it those girls?". I nodded and told her that i honestly don't deserve a girlfriend, but right when i said that i felt a tear drop onto my head. I looked up at her and all she said was "Niall you do deserve a girlfriend! You have to much love to keep to yourself!" All i could do was smile. I got up off the ground and helped her up.

Jaymie's POV

As Niall was helping me up it started pouring rain. So i stood up and started walking to the car but Niall pulled me back and gave me the longest kiss ever. I was now soaked but i didn't really care, except for the fact that i was shivering like crazy! Niall took his jacket off and handed me it. I refused because if he was cold what good would i be doing? He told me that aslong as i'm warm he doesn't care. He put his jacket around my shoulders and we got in the car. I remembered that i had left Amanda and Louis at Domino's but whatever. Niall walked me to the door, before i went inside he gave me on more kiss. The kissing turned into roughly kissing. I released from the kiss and opened the door letting him inside.  He smiled and thanked me. We sat on the couch watching tv. I went to the kitchen to make some popcorn, i heard Niall laughing like crazy so i peeked out to see what it was and he was watching Barny. I just glared at him while admiring his childness. I came back in to see Niall half asleep, i just giggled and sat down beside him. I placed the bowl of popcorn gently down, i felt his arm come around me as he placed his hand gently on my shoulder while i leaned my head on his chest. I felt my eyes get heavy so i shut them and i was out cold (sound asleep).I woke up to the smell of pancakes and bacon being made, i got up and it was Niall making some food. Brianna came downstairs rubbing her eyes, she walked right passed me as if she didn't even see me or even see Niall. But she slowly noticed an Irish accent in the kitchen, turning her head quickly to see Niall making breakfast, She looked over at me confused, and mouthed to me "Why is he here?". I giggled a bit and told her that he ended up spending the night. She nodded and walked over to the fridge pulling out some water and a salad. I looked at her like i was a confused dog. She told me that she just wanted salad for now. I nodded and sat down on the counter (yes on the counter!!). Niall put the pancakes and bacon on the plate. He handed me the plate and i ate. The pancakes were surprisingly good!!

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Author's note 

I know i said it would be longish but i am to lazy so here's what you get for today! i might update today idk if i should please tell me if i should! COMMENT AND VOTE please??? I need some feedback and tell me what i could change about my writing! PLEASE! Follow me on twitter @Jaymie_Horan

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