hanging with the boys

So here are the characters
Blesiv/alex
17

Kind,loud,outgoing
My brother

Carlos
16
Brothers friends
Loud,outgoing,smartish

Jack
17
Brothers friend
Funny,good dance moves
Loud

Christephor
18
Brothers friends
Loud,funnyish

Oliver moy
15
Cute,funny,smart

Me/maddie
19
Sister of blesiv
Funny

        I was siting when I heard a knock on my door I said come in it was blesiv my brother I asked ''what do u want" he said ''I'm having da boys over tonight" he left out of my room and a couple minutes later I heard a knock on the front door

Blesiv pov

I was sitting and eating in the kitchen when I heard a knock on the front door I went to the door and opened it it was carlos,jack and chris ''da boys"  we walked to up to my bedroom Chris walked up the stairs and said who's room that "it's my my sister's room  Chris said ''you have a sister"

Maddie pov
I was sitting when I heard them coming up the stairs when I heard christephor say who room is that blesiv said my sister room christephor said u have a sister I  was still in my pjs when my brother and his friends went in his room  and went live changed into this

I called my bestie
Jade
Lexi
Jorja
And said do u guys wanna go to the mall they replied with yasss girl meet you guys there
I walked out my door and went into blesiv room everyone on the live was commenting "who's behind you guys then carlos read the comment and he looked behind him and said Alex sister and carlos said alex alex looked behind him and said "what" ''she said I'm going to the mall with my girls" ok

Blesiv pov
Wow blesiv u got a hot sister why don't we see here often cause gone modeling half the time

Carlos" she models"
Wow
Does she have insta asked chris
Yes
Can I have it
You can have it bit my sister off limits guys
Ever one on the live is commenting over protective brother
After an hour
The boys decide when alex sister get home were asking if she want to go to a party
After an hour
Maddie comes home comes up stairs to alex room to the boys grinding she watches then says what are u guys doing
They stop and said were grinding the live said to chris asked if she want to go to a party
She said sure she goes into her room and changes into this

II came out of my room and went into alex room I went down stairs to the  front yard and I said dibs driving I drove to the party I reckenized the house it was my exes house I said to da boys I'm gonna go home carlos said why I said" this is my exes house " carlos asked who my ex was I said cody
He said he moved she said he did

Maddie pov I parked the car and got out of the car  and walked in side as chris asked if he could talk to me I said sure I said what's up he said nothing much I'm just asking do u have a boyfriends
I knew what he was trying to do I said yes and I do have a boyfriend his name is Oliver moy

Jack pov
Chris wanted to talk to maddie  let it slide I went inside with carlos,jack we partyed

Maddie pov
He sad I could tell but
Before I could tell him I was sorry Oliver came from behind me and got in my car and said to  chris can u pls tell alex to text me when u guys want to go home chris said yes

Alex pov 
I saw chris walking towards us he looked sad so when he got here I asked were my sister went he said
She went off with Oliver Oliver my boy he said carlos she said to text her
When u need her to pick us up we can call an Uber the Uber got here after half a hour we got to the house and went inside we went up stairs and we heard my sister bed creaking
Jack:da boy is getting sum
We went into my room and sat down and jack I went live and chris said he was going to bed so it was Carlos and alex on the live sum
People on the live were commenting