Afterlife

Enjoy the adventure of an confused girl who winds up in the after life after dying. xxx ;) vote comment fan!! It might be boring cause of all the talking but you guys got to know how the afterlife works ;)

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"Where am I?" I woke up in pure whiteness. I felt quarry and uneasy. The whiteness wasn't helping me feel better. No matter where i looked whiteness was everywhere. Everything was blurry. I looked at myself to find out that i was wearing a white gown. I layed back down and rested. I suddenly got up and had a wave of a panic attack. "Hello!!! Anyone here? Someone help me!"

"Relax my dear Eva, I'll explain all. Honey do you remember anything about last night?" Last night? I thought to myself. "Not really but where am I and who are you?" I swore i could hear her say she belongs with the lost angels. "Can you not panic, what I'll say is that your life is now in the afterlife. I know this will be too hard for you to bear but you have to listen to your goals, rules and responsibility." she nodded waiting for me to nod to.

"Last night while you were walking getting food for your mother, just when a car hit you in the parking lot. You died. So n-" I cut her off. "Excuse me your saying that I'm dead?! Then where am I and what am i doing here!!!" She looked ticked off so i stopped talking. "Honey if you let me explain you'll know everything." She stared at me to let me say anything before I interrupted. "Obviously we as when we were humans always thought about where do we go when we die? This is a place called the afterlife. Ok honey?" I was too shocked i couldn't understand anything.

"When I first died I had rules to follow and responsibilities. Our goal is to all reach heaven. That's simple? Now rules and responsibilities are joined together. Your responsibility is to rest in peace. You can't. Obviously you'd like too finish up your shopping right? It's not just about shopping though It's a chance to fix anything you need to. Remember your have a problem with your dad." I suddenly remembered that before i got out my dad started a big fight about my grades in school and all that.

"So my dear Eva you will get a map around afterlife and simply just go to the responsiblility booth. The worker will give you ur pass to see your father and to appoligies. Now he'll explain the rest. Ofcourse you'lll need to go to ghost school to learn a little bit more but hen you'll achieve your problem and rest in peace. If you fail you'll go to hell." I gasped. What did i do to go to hell. " Now honey I know this is hard for you but you have to do this. and you must listen to each clue and hint you get. Here is a list or rules and a map.

She vanished like that in thin air. I better not get too shocked because this place is going to get weird. i started at the map. "Wow!" I cried. The place was huge. I looked at the rules:

RULES LIST:

1. Never wander around, you might get lost in the other world if you go in to a wrong door.

2. Never complain about what you got.

3. Don't interact with the bad kids at school.

4. ALWAYS listen to Miss Dumforg.

5.Never show your self to a human that doesn't need to see you.

6. Do not break your responsibility or your goals

7. NEVER EVER BREAK THE RULES

*If your caused to break rules you got your self a pass to Nevermore (hell)

I stayed seated a bit taking this all in my head. I opened my eyes and i saw a door leading to the Afterlife Plaza. When ever your ready a voice said. I wish i could cry or have any feelings at all. I was so scared at this moment i didn't know what to do. I stood up and walked through the door.