Old House Nightmare

Chapter 2

Water drips from my face as I slowly try to force my eyes open . Ouch !! Why does my head hurt . Omg , there's a cut on my head . How did that happen? . I suddenly remembered where I was and I started looking around frantically for the little red headed girl but she's no where in site . I thought to myself . What's happening. That can't be Amanda, she died when we were 10 . She fell and hit her head against the steel pipes . So how , no why am I seeing her .
As I'm thinking to myself , I search for my phone . Maybe my friends will come back if I cried to them . Maybe they'll believe me , just maybe . Great my phone is dead , iPhones suck . As I tried to get up , I hear someone in the distance. Omg she's coming , I have to get out of here . Wait there's a window down here somewhere . As I searched I became more scared .. I can hear her getting closer . Ah there it is. Maybe I can get out this way , hopefully I can fit threw this little window .
I started to climb threw the basement window . Yes I can fit , I'm going to get out of here . Just then someone grabs a hold of my left leg . Ahhhh , let go . I kicked and kicked but that was no help . I was dragged back into this awful place . I cried and cried , someone helppppp me !!. But nothing . No one could save me now . I have to do something . I can't die here . I get up to run but just then my stomach started to hurt , it felt like I was being stabbed . As I looked down I couldn't believe it . A steel pipe was sticking out of my rib , ahhh someone help , I suddenly dropped to the floor and everything went dark .
I woke up .omg I'm in pain , so much pain , I'm bleeding out . I need to kill her somehow , I need to get out . I thought to myself . I looked down at my stomach where I was bleeding and realized that the steel pipe is still in me . Quickly I tried my best to pull it out . I'm strong , I can do this ., it took some time but I got it out . I feel so weak but I can't give up now .
Oh no . I hear her coming , i stayed still to have her think that I was still unconscious . As she approaches, I thought to myself . This is my chance . She calls out to me , LONDON WAKE UP ,LONDON WAKE UP . But I didn't move . Laughter fills the room again , LOOK WHOS HELPLESS NOW, LOOK WHOS GOING TO DIE. Just then I jumped up and stabbed the steel pipe threw her head and ran to the window . I crawled threw just in time and got out . I could hear her crying my name , I can hear her screaming , she's angry . I need to run . As I ran further and further away . , I looked back and I see no one . I feel weak . Everything goes dark again .
I wake up . Ugh this pain , so much pain . As I opened my eyes fully , I see my friends all sitting around my hospital bed , fast asleep. I almost died I thought to myself . But I made it .
I still can't help but wonder what happened to Amanda!!! Is she dead ? Is she still alive ? Does anyone believe me ? Eh probably not . They must think that I'm crazy .
I still feel so weak , I need to get some rest , I closed my eyes and slowly drifted back to sleep .

The End .

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