Humari adhuri kahani

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Marriage arrangements are going on
Nik was standing,holding garlands at one temple.

"Lakshya came! Teja?" Nik asked

"She is getting ready, anytime she will be here"

"He is great lover and great husband too lucky! He accepted to give his wife to you" nik said

"Shutup! Now dont talk this here! If teja listens na, it will not be good for her health" lucky sat in mandap.

Sanskar was standing at entrance of the temple. Then teja/Ragini entered the temple.
Sanskar was just looking at her, tears started to fall

Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
(we came close,yet the distances never reduced.
our story remained incomplete..
it is not necessary that the earth always
goes to meet sky..
the true love is the one that
does not get a destination..)

She moved towards the steps of temple and started climbing the steps and sanskar also walked along with  ragini.
Tears rolling from his eyes

rang thay, noor tha
jab kareeb tu tha
ek jannat sa tha, ye jahaan
(there were colors, there was light,
when you were near me.
this world was like heaven..)

Both Ragsan came to mandap
But Ragini started walking towards Lakshya and sat beside him.

waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
likh ke chhoD gaya tu kahaan
(on the sand of time, you left
something like my name written..)

Pandit started mantras, lakshya holded her hand feeling very happy that he is getting his love of his life whom he loved like anything.

Sanskar saw their hands which they are holding eo. Wiped his tears and started to leave the place.
humari adhoori kahani..
humari adhoori kahani..
(our incomplete story,
our incomplete story..)

Sanskar wanted to see her at last time as his wife, he slowly turned to her

khushbuon se teri yoon hi Takra gaye
chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye
(I ran into your fragrances like that only..
see, walking, where have we come..)

He saw Ragini lying on Lakshya shoulder, sanskar smiled wholeheartedly and his soul disappeared.
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After 3years
Same temple One guy is sitting holding mangalsutra.
Tears were rolling from his eyes,
Then a hand on his shoulder made him turn to see
"Lucky! Its been 3years please moveon" Nik said
"Why! Nik...why its been this tough to even think that she is not with me😭😭" saying Lakshya cried and nik took him to a bone crushing hug.

jannatein agar yaheen
tu dikhe kyon nahi
chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
intezaar tera sadiyon se kar raha
pyaasi baiThi hai kab se yahaan
hamari adhoori kahaani
(if there are heavens here only,
why can't I see you here..
the moon and the sun, everything is here only..
I have been waiting for you for centuries..
why is our incomplete story sitting here, thirsty..)

Flashback
Before the wedding day
Night

"Lucky!!! You are very lucky, you are going to marry your love" nik said hugging him

"I will make her happy nik, but my fear is what if she remembers her past and leave me"
This words heard by Ragini while entering into Lakshya room but after listening them she stopped entering and listened completely

"What is her past lucky??" Nik asked
And lucky narrated the whole story.

"He is great and really feeling sad for him" Nik said

Ragini ran to her room holding her hurting head and she soon remembered
How her father tried to kill her even by accident And watching sanskar, she remembered everything her love for sansakar...His death Broke her more.

pyaas ka ye safar khatam ho jaayega
kuch adhoora sa jo tha poora ho jaayega
(this journey of thirst will get over,
that which seemed incomplete will be completed,)

She cried all the night and when she entered the temple only thing was running in her mind was ,She is going to be someone's from Ragini sanskar kapoor.
This broken her
And
Every mantras priest chanting she remembered her marraige with sanskar.

jhuk gaya aasmaan
mil gaye do jahaan
har taraf hai milan ka samaa
Doliyaan hain saji, khushbuein har kaheen
paDhne aaya khuda khud yahaan..
(the sky has bowed,
and the two worlds have met..
everywhere there is season of meeting..
there are palanquins ready, there are fragrances everywhere,
even God himself came here to read..)

When lakshya tried to tie mangalsutra....Her heart stopped beating and she just fell on his shoulder.

Lakshya stood heartbroken 😭😭

humari adhoori kahani..
humari adhoori kahani..
(our incomplete story,
our incomplete story..)

humari adhoori kahani..
humari adhoori kahani..
(our incomplete story,
our incomplete story..).

Here i have to clear one thing that ragini dad tried to kill them bcz sanskar  is orphan and he has no property and he is not equal in his status, but he acted good for his daughter and Further he cant take it so he killed both of them.
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Adhuri kahani 😭
Really i feel very connected to the song.
So thought to write on this longback but i feel it didnt go well and took this whole day to think about this story and here we go 🤙🏻🤙🏻

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