I have no idea why people still read this, this was from 2017 and oh heck am I cringing at the first parts. How could you just randomly want to join a class and successfully transfer without any permission from a higher rank in the school, like the principal or at least talk about it to one of the teachers?
I fell like the start was pretty rushed as well, and overused, that waking up in the morning thing and such. And reader-chan didn't have that much chemistry with Nagisa even to begin liking him in the start- it's like a sudden liking, infatuation? Then it can't be called love.
Story title I put doesn't fit the flow of the writing I did here as well-
I'm really glad people still read the story until now and it's been 3 years already though, I appreciate everyone's support. I only have gotten to use my Wattpad account today again and I'm happy that my story which I didn't unpublish still has some readers.
What do you think though? Shall I revise the story to make it more fitting to the title, take things slowly and improve them in order for Reader-san to have a concrete reason to fall for our Nagisa? It may take a bit long though since I have other priorities to write (but not in wattpad) at the current.
Or if not, shall I end the story, no matter how confusing it is? Shall I leave it be and continue my draft from last year (?) of the last chapter? What do you think, readers?
I'm seriously cringing though, ngl. I improved my writing style already as the time passed and looking back to this, it has many errors and lacks explanation and stuff.
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"A Voyage Towards First Love" ~Nagisa X Reader~ [IN REVISION]
Fiksi PenggemarA girl who always worked hard to get high grades and dreamed of studying in the prestigious Kunugigaoka High meets an unexpected twist of events?! "It's not such an ideal school after all." She finds herself falling to the End Class after a series...