Man in black

part 2

I run out of the building with my fellow initiates, and soon-to-be fellow faction members. We run all the way to the trian platform. We all stand on the edge of a platform, waiting for the ten ton peice of medal on wheels to come barreling past us. It isnt long until the trian turns the corner ,and comes twords us. All the dauntless-born and dauntless members start to run with the train. A guy with black hair jumps on first and opens up the other cars. I start to run, and when I get to a door, I jump sideways into the open door. I move twords the back so other people can get on. I sit in the far corner. The next person to get in this car is the amity girl that stood behind me.

  " Hey didn't you stand in front of me at the choosing ceromony?" she asked as she walked in my direction.

  " Yeah. What is your name again?" I ask

" Amanda Adamson," she says as she sits next to me.

  " Well Amanda I'm Sam."

  " Yeah I know. You were the first person to transfer." We sit in silence the whole ride to wherever they are taking us.

  " Okay lets jump," a dauntless man yells. I get up and look out the nearest car open, and see people dressed in black jumping from the trian to a seven story building with a gap in between. When it is our turn, I walk to the back of the trian, run to the edge, and jump landing on the roof. I land and my knees buckle. I get up, look around, and laugh as I see all the none dauntless initiates on the ground looking like kicked puppies.  I got up and walked over to the edge where one man is standing on the ledge.

"INITIATES!" he screams. Everyone walks over to him. "Welcome to Daumtless Headquarters.  I am Amar. I will be training the transfers. But first.  You all must jump off this building to get in. Have fun. See you at the bottom." And with that he leans back and falls downward into the black hole at the bottom.