Well, I've all but killed the story. I changed so much when I edited the first chapter I've not only shortened it to half of what it used to be at least but doubled the editing time for the second chapter. I've also done an epic fail on Lilly's personality, I have several chapters drafted all about her bubbily and cheerful personality and attempting to make jokes in the most serious of situations. This just doesn't feel like the Lilly I wrote, since I can tell some people have read the story I think there are a few options here.
1
Hope I backed up chapter 1 and re-edit it to more suit Lilly's personality and hopefully make it more interesting
2
Change Lilly's personality to fit the chapter
3
Throw Lilly into a different time period, four of which I can think of
Later on in the ATLA animated series
Around the comics period after the TV series
Korra's time in the series.
Korra's time before the series.
4
Or just not write the story, or put it on a hiatus or on hold until I can turn it into more 'quality' work.
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A Lilly in Bloom
FanfictionLilly, a young 11 year old girl finds herself in the world of avatar. Come along as this cheerful child helps the best she can, and discover hidden skills along the way.
