Warrior Guide

Plotline Q and A Will Your Plot Hook Readers?

Here is where you can ask us about your plot! Its like a Plot Rater!

Form:

Question:
Who you're asking:

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Main Character:
Story Title:
Plot:
Who you want to rate it:

First I'll give you an Example of Snowystar rating the plot for Avenging Examplepaw.

MC (main character): Samplepaw
Story Title: Avenging Examplepaw
Plot: Examplepaw, brother of Samplepaw, was brutally murdered and Samplepaw wants to find out who did it and why. Samplepaw gets close to finding the killer but then the killer strikes again, leaving Samplepaw with new clues that no longer point to the cat she thought had killed Examplepaw but now to a new cat. Will Samplepaw ever find the real killer? Or will she be killed trying?
Rater: Snowystar (Cat_lover321)

Rating:

MC: Th- That's an interesting name there... Samplepaw... It's um... Decent... The Paw suffix is decent and the prefix is... Different... 6/10 for the name.
Title: That name tho. Why the name? But other than that the name sounds interesting and intriguing so 8/10. BUT THAT NAME THOUGH. (Fernleaf: *laughs* in dying inside. Its an example, calm down.)
Plot: It sounds like an interesting book. I think the names would need some work. I'm mean; SAMPLEpaw and EXAMPLEpaw (Fernleaf: *laughing in background*) 9/10 because of the names
Total: 23/30 (Fernleaf: *dying* its a sample lol harsh)
Rated by: Snowystar
~Fernleaf and Snowystar

Hello, and since Fernleaf did an example of me rating her book, I will do an example of her rating Burning Ice, or at least the plot.

Main Character: Icefang
Story Title: Burning Ice
Plot: It starts at an apprentice ceremony to make Icefangs kits; Oakkit, Falconkit, and Snowkit, into apprentices. The clan seems normal until one day Snowpaw and Firewing are battle training and Firewing "accidentally" kills her. Icefang is deviated an has to find out who did this as she doesn't know that Firewing did it. She looks for clues as more cats are killed. A prophecy is floating around and cats think its her who should stop this madness. Durning a fire at the camp she figures I it it was Firewing. The battle intensifies as Icefang tries to kill this murderer, and she does get burnt. Icefang wins and the clan is safe once more.

Time to bring in the wild Fernleaf monster!!!!

Fernleaf: *bangs against walls of cage* I SMELL PLOTLINES!!!!!

Rating: ((after the wild Fernleaf licks Snowystar's face for no reason whatsoever))

Snowystar: *screaming* WHY DID YOU LICK MY FACE!?!?

MC: 9/10 for the name, I'm just not sure where the fang part comes in.
Story title: 10/10 I love how you made the title and grammar and all that Jazz!
Plot: 9/10 HOW DOES THE FIRE START!?!? HOW DOES ANYTHING ELSE THAT'S NOT FIREWING AFFECT THE PLOT!? jk, jk. 9/10 because his did the fire start? Who is Icefangs mate? Does he even care about their dead kit?
Total: 28/30 ((better than I got lol ~Fernleaf))

~Snowystar and Fernleaf