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Dirty Little Secrets

Romance

Written by: _rainynightslover

Characters:

I really love how you describe your characters and think it's very interesting how you incorporate the pictures of outfits and looks! I also like how the development of their relationships is slow and not too rushed. I do think that you could add some more details in that area though, to give more depth to the connections. You've got to make sure to keep the connections alive and keep all the details flowing.

Plot:

I really love how the story is starting, not too fast but focusing on the important parts of your plot. You never want to make it seemed too rushed to get to the parts that might be more exciting to write, but you do a great job of keeping it steadily moving along. I love how even in the subtle moments you keep it interesting and leave the reader wanting more.

Overall review:

I really enjoyed this from the start and can tell it's going to be a great book! You already are keeping the suspense going and make all the connections and plot exciting! It doesn't feel dull when you read, pulling you in in a good way. Awesome job so far, you know how to keep the readers attention!