Another DBZ High School Story

Bardock v.s. Raven

No p.o.v.

"Suicide you say....who on this planet that would do something so stupid as to taking there own life" raven's tear slid down her face and onto the ground "my sister....my sister would and she did two years ago" Bardock looked as if he didn't care "tell me more" he said "...why" she said

Cana p.o.v.

"Tell me more" Bardock said and also kinda demanded "...why" raven answered coldly...not again....goku trunks and gohan knew something was wrong probably because the worried look on my face goku wispered asked "what's wrong" I couldn't tell them here to many people and Bra is looking so I just shook my head and said "tell you after school" they nodded "why not" he continued as he started walking to when he was within three feet of her she disappeared then kneed him in the gut...ravens power level was changing it was raising more than a normal saiyan and it was becoming darker "bardock get away from her" he got up with a smirk "you think I can't handle a weakling like her" he said,he's getting a little carried away he doesn't see her power is rising....his fault....this is about to get interesting I smirked a little

no p.o.v.

Bardock tried to punch her but she disappeared and reappeared she kicked him in the face and jumped back Bardock took no time at all to get back up "kid I hope you know I'm going easy on you" he said whiping the blood off his mouth she slightly smirked "why....I don't need you to...I bet...my life that I'm stronger than you" he raised an eyebrow "you remind me of two of my studen two years ago I did the same test as you.... One came back..... One dident...." Cana got a confused look 'is he....talking about....k-kaly....and me' she thought "they had a lot of potential" he pointed to cana "she came back...."he said with a smirk"but kaly didn't" raven was shocked

Raven p.o.v.

He said my sisters name I put my head down and almost immediately tears poured out of my eyes.....he did it....he made her kill herself....I made my hand into fist.....and lost it "AAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH"

Goku's p.o.v.

"Woah" I said in complete shock I had to put both arms up to cover my face "raven....is.....really,really strong" wind was blowing everywhere it was pretty hard to see her but her power level was amazing the wind was starting to blow me back

Bardock p.o.v.

This is kaly's sister huh.....I knew it.....they look exactly alike but they act totally different I smirked and uncrossed my arms as the wind died down....now to test her real strength...as the smoke cleared from her I was shocked but I didn't show it...

No p.o.v.

Raven had golden hair a golden ora around her and red eyes (yeaa I know for sure there eyes are turquoise when they go ssj....but raven is different ) she was starring daggers at Bardock who powered up a ki blast and blasted her she blocked it with one arm a few students were amazed "your a super saiya" one if them said while pointing at her "impressive" Bardock said "......until you got angry" raven sprinted to him "I don't give a shit" she yelled at him,she tried to punch him but she was to mad to think straight Bardock dodged it he dodged all her attacks then found an opening he punched her in her face twice then kneed her in her stomach then side kicked her in the face making her fly back "you wanted to see my full power here it is.....just know that I won't  show mercy anymore" his power started to rise power and raven whiped the blood off of her mouth

Sorry I haven't responded in like forever and I know all the parts are short and I decided to keep it that way plz don't kill me but I have way to many things going on I'll do my best tho to respod tho

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