First I just want to say I'm back and never been more eager to finish this story, I lost the Internet for a couple of months because the company screwed up. I want to apologize for not updating in a Long time. Well anyways I think I've matured a lot in my writing and I can't wait to see what you think;
Sincerely,
Kaitlin.
The cold air stings my open flesh torn in my ankle, it was most definitely not a sprain. I watch in pain at the red flesh and the twisted angle; it surely will take a while to heal. I mentally groan. I gasp in pain when Harper puts a cold washcloth over the opened wound. He watches the covered area like a feline does to it's prey.i close my eyes trying to endure the pain the best I can, I wince when I lean back. The cloth collecting inside the skin. I close my eyes, my forehead set in complete concentration. My fingernails inserted deeply in my palms. I take a deep breath when Harper removes the cloth. Step one down, here goes step two. The ointment sits heavily on top of the broken skin, I wonder how I even gotten this wound. Then I pull out of my haze when I see string and a needle. "Oh no!" My mind is swirling there isn't nothing he could do to stick that thing in my already punctured skin. "Gabrielle I need to close the wound so it doesn't become infected, which is grotesque." I take a deep breath "Okay just do it, I don't want it to become infected" with a whimper I look down at the wound, it looks like someone dug a knife in the soft skin, trickles of blood rolling of my ankle slowly landing on the fresh white sheets. I feel the pierce, I bite my lip a single tear falling off my chin. The pull of the thread, poking new holes vibrated and numbed the area. I watched fascinated. Harpers skilled fingers never fail, he is in intense concentration, his dark blue eyes following his every move. A piece of blonde hair falling at his brow. With one last stitch he closes the wound. With a silent mouth, eying the work, I unthinkably move my cold hand moving the blonde hair that always falls at his brow. He tenses and looks up those piercing dark blue eyes finding my crystal light blue eyes. I blink trying to ignore the intense stare.
Oh my gosh this is super short but I'm doing it for a reason, I want you to stay interested because face it even I wouldn't want to read a book that only has three paragraphs. I just ask for less than a week to blow your mind, I don't know who reads this or even if its worth reading all I ask is for a week or less. Currently I'm sick with strep throat so I have a week to improve this greatly. Tell me what you think about it so far. I never write such short chapters and I apologize extremely.

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Mystery / ThrillerA girl named Gabrielle has a lot to face, growing up poor with no one other than her mother who is horrifically murdered, she finds herself as an orphan. Until she is adopted by her now new foster parents. A couple of years go by and Gabrielle reali...