"Goodnight"

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Roses are red
Violets are bule
Daisy's are white
Just like my skin before
The pitch black sky takes over
Just like closing my eyes
Hoping the blackness stays
Turns out I shouldn't of been hoping
The sounds from crickets
Sounds like the room
The rain sounds like me
Drowning in tears

Rose's are red
Just like my blood
Violets are bule
Just like my lips
The stars are shiny
Reminds me of something
Reminds me of what I'm supposed to be doing

I only see rose's
And now the pitch black sky takes over
Now I'm allowed to close my eyes and
Say...
"Goodnight"

Hi it's my first ever story or poem I ever made and even posted it but my friends and family said it was nice but dark. Please give me feedback

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