okay so I failed at my last one.......and deleted it so here's a new one wish me luck
I was walking home breathing on my hands hoping they would warm up...they didn't "I wish I brought my sweatshirt" I thought aloud then I realized "I'm not to far from my house its only a block away"as I started to jog I saw my best friend and ran to him "hey" I said as I slowed down to catch my breath it was great to see him "hey" he replied his voice sounding hoarse "are you sick?" I stammered as I moved closer "just a little, oh hey by the way my parents are going to be out of town so-"I cut him off " no more parties" he chuckled "I wasn't suggesting that I was going to say I need a place to stay" it was my turn to laugh "your 18 and you need to stay with someone while your parents are away" I tried to stop laughing but I couldn't "they don't trust me" he replied with a grumble telling me to shut up
how's that for chapter 1....stupid I know let me know what I need to change(scratch that I need to change everything)
