Cloaked Heart

Chapter 3"My hero"

                                             (A few days later the Thunder Legion goes on a job)

Evergreen: *walking next to love behind the guys* So Love, do you like anyone in the guild?

Love: *blushes* No...I...I mean m..Maybe..

Evergreen: You don't gotta be shy about it Love. Maybe i can help set you guys up if you tell me!!

Love: *whispers in her ear* I really like Laxus...

Evergreen: *looks at her* Wait really? I thought you were scared of him?

Love: Yeah...I am...that's why i don't want him to know...he scares me....he picks on me..

Evergreen: Aww..poor Love...*smiles* Maybe he does those things because he likes you..

Love: He would never like me...

Freed: *looks back at them* Who would never like you Love?

                                              ( Bickslow and Laxus look back curious as well)

Love: Umm..N..no one..*looks away embarrassed* 

Bickslow: Come on Love! Tell us!!

Laxus: *looks at Bickslow* It wouldn't matter if she told us or not. The guy still wouldn't like her. I mean look at her...she is soo weak..i don't blame him for not liking her! 

Love: *runs away crying* I hate you Laxus!

Evergreen: *looks at Laxus* You have gone way too far this time! You are so mean to Love for no reason! She is not weak! No wonder she hates you! *runs after Love*

Laxus: *is hurt but hides it*

Freed: Why did you say those things to her Laxus?

Bickslow: Yeah dude..you really hurt her this time.

Laxus: *looks at them and stops* because i am in love with her....*looks away* and she likes someone else...

Freed: How do you know that is not you?

Laxus: Because i scare her everytime i am around....i make her cry...

Bickslow: Then stop being so scary around her....when you guys are alone...don't say mean things and scare her off with showing off how mighty and powerful you are...instead make her feel safe when you are around.

Laxus: *looks at him* How do i do that?

Bickslow: That is something you got to figure out by yourself..but we can get you alone together..

Freed: Also...we know something about Love that can help you...

Laxus: What is it?...

Bickslow: She is scared of being alone and thunder storms...

Freed: There is supposed to be one tonight....So if we can get you guys alone...then she is more than likely to trust you...

Laxus: That is smart....but what if i mess it up...

Freed: If you love her than that is impossible.

Laxus: Okay..

Freed: Now all we need to do is get Evergreen in on the plan....

Evergreen: I already am...don't worry Love didn't hear. I took her to a place that all of this can take place. The thunder storm is coming, you all might wanna hurry!!

Freed: Okay!

Laxus: Thanks Ever!

Evergreen: Don't worry about it but you better not ruin it!

(Times skip: Ever, Bickslow, and freed pushed Laxus into the building that Love was alone in right before the thunder storm started and locked the door shut.)

Love: *in the corner covering ears while crying* Why does it always gotta storm when i am on a job!!

Laxus: *walks over to her, sits down next to her, puts his coat and earphones on her* I am sorry...I was a jerk ..

Love: *looks at him* why did you do it though? What did i ever do to you?

Laxus: Nothing...I am just in love with you....I thought you liked someone else so i was mean in order to try and get rid of my feelings for you...

Love: and did it work?

Laxus: Nope...*looks at her* So...Love...I was wondering if you would be my girlfriend? 

Love: Sure...are you still gonna be mean to me?

Laxus: No...of course not..*pulls her closer* Thank you...

                                           (At that moment someone bust through the doors)

?: Give me the girl or else!

To be continued....

What will happen?

Should i make comments throughout the story to put comedy in it or no?