This book was problematic. Just to let you guys know, I don't proof read my stuff and I don't reread them.
I haven't read this book since I wrote it. Let's see what 2019 me would think about my 2016 fic.
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'Revolver' God I hateeee that. Who liked that? I was on the middle of this book when I was like "This name is horrible"
I was planning on naming my OC by gun (Sniper, Pistol, etc.) what was I on? I don't know.
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See that typo? I clearly didn't.
On the new version, I implemented more of the 'neglecting' part. I made sure it's more highlighted and talked about.
Also, I changed up a lot of Jade. Because think about this, she's good at NXT but shit at WWE? #Plothole
So yeah, I cleared up A LOT LOT (Even that name, still Alpha Jade but no more guns)
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Tbh when I read it just now, it made me impressed. 2013 me kept her word.
It definitely was the toughest chick in the room story but in a different, less overused style.
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@/balorspayne (I won't tag you guys you probably don't know this one still existed) I luv u hun
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Them my groupies actually.
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@/SydneyBeckett06 I hope you're referring to the Alpha Jade part because it is kinda cool.
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Loviessss
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@/David and @/Libra you guys :((( I made this story for people lile you ❤️ I'm crying, I'm sorry for barely replying to your comments, it always get flooded. I'll be more active on the new one.
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@/Myowndreams I already love u ❤️
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Final thoughts: This prologue was not as bad, but it was definitely cliché (Funny since I mentioned how I wasn't going to be cliché)
OMG IT'S THE FIRST CHAPTER SHIT I'M SOO EMBARASSED RN BECAUSE A SHIT SHOW IS ABOUT TO START AHHHH
